My first Death Note
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Amo-Chan
- Joined: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:47 pm
- Location: Back in the Black Hole a.k.a. the Midwest
My first Death Note
I'd like to announce my first Death Note amv. I hope you enjoy it. And please let me know what you think. Any and all help is always appreciated.
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JaddziaDax
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Panky
- Joined: Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:57 am
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I don't usually post to give advices because i'm never sure if i'm too right about what I say, but I'll tell you what you can make to improve your video from my point of view ( I even have to search for the lyrics because I can't understand them always 
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At 0:52, it would be much better if you synched the thunder with the drums, i think it would be spectacular.
Also, at every shout of "PAIIIINNNN" you could change of image, not neccesarily of situation.
At 1:17-+ with the drums a change of situation would have been better.
At 2:22 were you merge 2 videos with same opacity ( I guess ) you should add more contrast to the L one, or divide the screen in 2, I have made that you have too ( obssesion to put everything
) but I think it doesn't look very good.
Before the clip at 2:24 there's a very short black clip, maybe you didn't notice.
Also, near 2:41 there's a stray clip that parpadates.
I liked the synchronation at 3:09 with the fall of L. It was nice.
I'm not asking you to fix this things, but try to work them out for next projects.
Overall, I think it was very good, don't think i hated your video because i have put so many negative points, the things I haven't complained about, that's because I think they are OK. You tried your best to synch the lyrics to the video, and considering that making a Death Note AMV is VERY difficult ( 90% monologues ) I think you did a great work here.
Good luck on your next videos
)At 0:52, it would be much better if you synched the thunder with the drums, i think it would be spectacular.
Also, at every shout of "PAIIIINNNN" you could change of image, not neccesarily of situation.
At 1:17-+ with the drums a change of situation would have been better.
At 2:22 were you merge 2 videos with same opacity ( I guess ) you should add more contrast to the L one, or divide the screen in 2, I have made that you have too ( obssesion to put everything
) but I think it doesn't look very good.Before the clip at 2:24 there's a very short black clip, maybe you didn't notice.
Also, near 2:41 there's a stray clip that parpadates.
I liked the synchronation at 3:09 with the fall of L. It was nice.
I'm not asking you to fix this things, but try to work them out for next projects.
Overall, I think it was very good, don't think i hated your video because i have put so many negative points, the things I haven't complained about, that's because I think they are OK. You tried your best to synch the lyrics to the video, and considering that making a Death Note AMV is VERY difficult ( 90% monologues ) I think you did a great work here.
Good luck on your next videos
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Amo-Chan
- Joined: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:47 pm
- Location: Back in the Black Hole a.k.a. the Midwest
I totally agree with the thunder...I tried to do it actually, but for some reason, Vegas was being all squirrely with me. I'm still struggling with the whole opacity thing. And...Um...what does parpadate mean?Pankyy wrote:
At 0:52, it would be much better if you synched the thunder with the drums, i think it would be spectacular.
At 2:22 were you merge 2 videos with same opacity ( I guess ) you should add more contrast to the L one, or divide the screen in 2, I have made that you have too ( obssesion to put everything
Before the clip at 2:24 there's a very short black clip, maybe you didn't notice.
Also, near 2:41 there's a stray clip that parpadates.
I am happy that you took the time to show me these. I really appreciate help.