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McDoogle-san
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Newest BLleach AMV

Post by McDoogle-san » Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:58 am

Made this one about 4 days ago, tried to post it yesterday but my internet went down just after i finished uploading xD only used WMM though, this is the one i made before my WMM went pair shaped.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=138625

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Post by RagnarokEnd » Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:22 am

It's pretty good. Couple things that you might want to look at

1) Get rid of the divx logo. May not seem like a big thing, but when it keeps popping up and then disappearing it gets to be distracting. (check the FAQ's on how to do that)

2) Some of the scenes seemed odd and had no purpose
At one point you went from Ichigo defending against Hirako to Shunsui Kyōraku straight to Renji. The scene of the captain calmly swinging his weapons is quite at odds with the two slightly more actiony scenes around it. There wasn't any change in the music so I found it slightly jarring.

3) Most of your transitions though worked well. You mentioned that you did it in MovieMaker so I know it's a little more difficult, but try and be consistent between scene changes and the beat of the music.

Otherwise I liked it. It can do with a little bit of tweaking, but it's a good start. Also if you're interested, check out this video done of Bleach using the same song if you want something to compare to.

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Post by McDoogle-san » Mon Feb 12, 2007 11:59 am

thx for all the advice :P For things like the begining, i went of the sound waves in the audio bar for timing, did the same laster on but it got more difficuit. Im downloading that AMV now, may take a wile at 30kbps though lol

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Post by CodeZTM » Mon Feb 12, 2007 12:38 pm

RagnarokEnd hit most of the main points. I'd also like to add that you took the critisism quite well. Just do what he said and you'll do find. If you have questions, feel free to pm me.

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Post by Flame-X » Mon Feb 12, 2007 4:09 pm

for a movie maker vid, its not bad.

in addition to what the other guys said above, u could've cropped out the credits info in the movie trailer scenes by using avisynth and vdub.
another thing i like to mention is the quality on both video and audio. The next time you export something from movie maker, select "Best fit to the file size:" and set the size to the highest. Bigger the file, better quality... for wmvs. like this for example.

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