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beau kang
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First vid, would like a little criticism

Post by beau kang » Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:51 pm

Hey everyone. I know it says not to beg for opinions, and I'm not. I mearly want a little critcism on how my first vid turned out and whether I can improve on my skills. I'd like to enter my first contest this April at Ani-Zona. Anyways, here is the link to my vid:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=90317

Be as brutal as possible, I can take it (ow! Stupid hangnail.)

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Post by Sporkmaster » Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:26 am

I have your first video and I have been meaning to comment, but I have been busy, but I will make some comments on your video by the end of the week.
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Post by Rurounikeitaro » Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:28 am

If its for opinion exchanging, I'll opinion it later tonight.

The video of mine I'd like you to watch and opinion is: Advent Jinketsu
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Post by sasuke2468 » Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:16 pm

haha awsome kk i'll op urs and hey just op my thrity second vid in my sig ^_^

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Post by Kariudo » Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:11 pm

I just got done giving you the longest op I've ever given.
And let me tell ya. Brutal doesn't even begin to describe it. Usually I'm not anywhere near that harsh.
hope you find it useful
I would like some reality on my latest.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=88354
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Post by beau kang » Sat Oct 01, 2005 12:35 am

I appreciate all of your comments guys. Thanks a lot! :) I know that it was a little long, but it just didn't feel right to me to take out stuff from the song. Especially since I'd been listening to it for a good 5 months on the way home from school before I was even able to get Premiere. I'll get to your vids as soon as I can and I'll post an opinion about them.

Thanks again!
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