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Oasis AMV Studio >>> NEW AMV

Post by oooasis20022 » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:02 am

Well I have created a new AMV, and I need some people to view it and if they have time give me an OP cuz I know my Vid isn't the best and I want to know whats wrong with it so I dont make old mistakes.

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http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=57758

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Post by L0ner » Wed Dec 29, 2004 9:00 am

okee first i wanna know if this is your first amv if so keep up the work but try to time it better if this is not your first you should try to put a little more effort in it. like i said try to time it just rite..i know it takes up alot of time. usealy i am working for several months on 1 amv ^_^.

anyway i was like this to couple a years back so stick arround and il bet you can have like awsome amv's

hope to see more of you ^^

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Post by Daio Kaji » Wed Dec 29, 2004 11:51 am

keeping the pace of the video synced with the pace of the song is definately something that needs to be improved on, for example right in the beginning the scene with vegeta knocking broly's head back with that punch was there for like 3 or 4 different lyrics that were basically skipped

so that (for me) made that scene drag on just a bit, it should have been shorter and there should have been other scenes used for the other lyrics

so to keep the pace of the video going, having rythym is a must have, so make sure to take ur time and work scenes into the video that help to keep the energy up (for this type of song) that not only have action-sync, but also have enough of it that ur not skipping any good beats or riffs or whatever it is people decide to sync to

lyric-sync would help too like i said, like that vegeta punching broly scene, try to cover more lyrics and that'll make ur video even more entertaining to watch
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