My First-born....

[daphne]

I've admired AMVs for a long time...and now I made one. If you have the time, I'd love some feedback on it. It's basic and the theme is probably hack, but I had a blast. Now I know why there are so many AMVs out there...it's addictive.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=23749

So, take out the scissors and cut me to shreds...I need some constructive criticism. I want to eventually make AMVs as amazing as some of the ones I've seen on here.

Thanks for your time.

daphne

[lordsteal]

I've admired AMVs for a long time...and now I made one. If you have the time, I'd love some feedback on it. It's basic and the theme is probably hack, but I had a blast. Now I know why there are so many AMVs out there...it's addictive.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=23749

So, take out the scissors and cut me to shreds...I need some constructive criticism. I want to eventually make AMVs as amazing as some of the ones I've seen on here.

Thanks for your time.

daphne

I took a look at your video. I don't know what happened to me, I viewed and I wanted to view it all the way through. I thought to myself, this has never happened to me before with someones first video, I mean coming from a Newbe. I mean it wasn't the best video in the world, but it deffenetly caught my attention and made me say this person has some deffenet potencial. You choice the scene very nice and it made the video look so much better. The editing of the video could have been better, but the basis was their which I find just fine for your first. The video quality was ok and was jumping around from good to bad to decent video quality. The main problem I had with this video, or the video itself, was the bit rate, I mean it looked like you put it like at 10 or 5 instead of like 29.9 or 30. You need to rase the bit rate alot to get the maximum preformence out of your video. The effect use was non existent and that's ok, but some effects make for a higher quality for a video if placed right. Anyways, their you go. You have the right stuff, you go far in this indistry, so keep your chin up and make another video that completely kicks your first videos ass.

Lord Steal

[daphne]

WOW! Thank you so much, lordsteal. I am so grateful for the kind words...and the honest criticism. Those are really good points. I'm a total novice, so I'll have to find out what you mean by bitrate (yes, THAT novice) and I'll have to get a better editor (*cough* shareware *cough).

I am so humbled by your compliments. And inspired by your pointers.

I cannot express how happy I am that my first AMV didn't make someone flinch.

I have a lot to learn.....I am so excited.

Thanks again.

daphne

[lordsteal]

WOW! Thank you so much, lordsteal. I am so grateful for the kind words...and the honest criticism. Those are really good points. I'm a total novice, so I'll have to find out what you mean by bitrate (yes, THAT novice) and I'll have to get a better editor (*cough* shareware *cough).

I am so humbled by your compliments. And inspired by your pointers.

I cannot express how happy I am that my first AMV didn't make someone flinch.

I have a lot to learn.....I am so excited.

Thanks again.

daphne

Your welcome, ment everyword.

Lord Steal