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The Lorepeople's Favorite Claymore

Post by bowieee » Mon Jan 25, 2016 11:35 am

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Enjoy? ;3

Oh, and drop some critiques if you feel like it.

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Re: The Lorepeople's Favorite Claymore

Post by Kireblue » Fri Feb 05, 2016 11:22 am

I think that you should try changing up your sync a little more. For the most part, you stick to beat syncing your scenes for the entire video, but I feel that internal sync is just as important (if not more more important) to action vids. Internal sync helps your scenes flow with the song and connect more to the scene before and after it. Also, I feel that it helps draw the audience into the video. Just in case you don't know what I mean by internal sync, here is a great guide that explains it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... =2&t=92942 But I see that you're definitely making improvements from your "My Demons" video that I saw last year. So keep it up :up:

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Re: The Lorepeople's Favorite Claymore

Post by bowieee » Fri Feb 05, 2016 11:36 am

Yea, I know exactly what you're talking about and I also know that I didn't put any focus on it, only some stuff lines up here and there like in the first fight.

Since my next video is gonna be a romance one I'm probably not gonna get too many chances to practise it, but I'm definitely gonna adress this weakness on the one after that. For some reason I always end up editing to rock songs anyway... :/

Thanks for the feedback, kire! ;3

I'd like to think that both this one and the Haikyuu one I did for Secret Santa are way cleaner than the Kuroko "My Demons", especially since I wasn't playing around with effects.

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