My first AMV [HxH] - Warrior Inside

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My first AMV [HxH] - Warrior Inside

Post by DemonStation AMV » Sat May 30, 2015 6:52 am





My first AMV, hope you enjoy..

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Re: My first AMV [HxH] - Warrior Inside

Post by Kireblue » Fri Jun 05, 2015 1:07 pm

I feel that your video would have really benefited from some more focus. If you have focused on showing the perspective of a single character, it would have been easier for the viewer to understand what's happening. Also, I feel that you should have held back on all the lighting and color effects a bit. When coupled with the fact that so many of your scenes only lasted a second before they switched to a completely different fight, it because really hard to even make out what's on the screen. An so overall, I can see that you put in a lot of work on your effects and editing this, but I couldn't really get into it and a lot of scenes were a bit jarring.

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