Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

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Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by irriadin » Tue Nov 19, 2013 10:35 am

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Made for Team Mutiny's Beta Battle contest. Hope you enjoy!

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Re: Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by Changelling » Tue Nov 19, 2013 12:59 pm

this is not normal o_O too many amazing videos were released today! this 1 is exceptionally awesome! Got my 1080p copy *^* Yesh!!! very well done mate :) I enjoyed it so much

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Re: Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by FarmXD » Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:29 pm

Mmmh camera movements are not appropiate for what you're trying to do...
Also, not Kenshin's style at all. Random scene-changing video, is not bad but it could
be better focusing in a concept or some sense before the camera movements.
Kenshin fan speaking xD

1.5/5

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Re: Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by irriadin » Tue Nov 19, 2013 6:13 pm

995Gabber wrote:this is not normal o_O too many amazing videos were released today! this 1 is exceptionally awesome! Got my 1080p copy *^* Yesh!!! very well done mate :) I enjoyed it so much
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
FarmXD wrote:Mmmh camera movements are not appropiate for what you're trying to do...
Also, not Kenshin's style at all. Random scene-changing video, is not bad but it could
be better focusing in a concept or some sense before the camera movements.
Kenshin fan speaking xD

1.5/5
I actually did have a concept in this video. Sorry it didn't reach you, that's my bad. I actually put a lot of thought into the scene-selection as well, but again, I have to work on theme coherency, as it can be difficult to see what I'm doing at times. I try to aim for a segmented story-telling approach that tends to be more abstract than concrete... as such, it tends to be mistaken for random scenes thrown together.

Sorry it didn't work for you, hopefully my work in the future will appeal to you! And thanks for the critique.

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Re: Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by Mr. Fuzzyflippers » Tue Nov 19, 2013 7:25 pm

Personally it was one of my favorites from Round 2.

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Re: Dreams in Azure (Team Mutiny BBT Round 2)

Post by FarmXD » Wed Nov 20, 2013 8:39 am

irriadin wrote:
I actually did have a concept in this video. Sorry it didn't reach you, that's my bad. I actually put a lot of thought into the scene-selection as well, but again, I have to work on theme coherency, as it can be difficult to see what I'm doing at times. I try to aim for a segmented story-telling approach that tends to be more abstract than concrete... as such, it tends to be mistaken for random scenes thrown together.

Sorry it didn't work for you, hopefully my work in the future will appeal to you! And thanks for the critique.
No problem! Keep it up and sorry if I was rude
but I like to be honest when I have the mood for a critique :P

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