Proselytic Oblivion

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Proselytic Oblivion

Post by OtakuGray » Fri Sep 02, 2011 2:10 am

godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: Proselytic Oblivion

Post by LeX » Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:40 am

it was okey i like it nothing special at all but i liked it and wtf was that after 0:35? someone was very lazy lol

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Re: Proselytic Oblivion

Post by irriadin » Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:49 am

Really short but the effects and transitions in the first thirty seconds were nice. Not much else to say besides the title is appropriately pretentious for an Eva AMV...

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Re: Proselytic Oblivion

Post by CodeZTM » Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:22 am

Pretty nice. It had some interesting pacing from the soft to hard parts of the song. I'd also like to echo LeX's statement that after :35 felt a little disjointed with the rest of the AMV.

Also, the text had some very rough edges in/during the zoom. Be careful of that. ;) Speaking of the text, it was kind of uneven in the windows for the "walk" part, and was kind of oddly placed in the beginning to me.

But still, you're steadily improving. Keep it up!

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