Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

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Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

Post by lloyd9988 » Mon May 23, 2011 9:40 pm

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Re: Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

Post by lloyd9988 » Tue May 24, 2011 9:16 pm

Thought I'd post my other Music Video here as well :)

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Re: Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

Post by Minimoto » Wed May 25, 2011 1:37 am

Watched the first one; not bad.

A lot of lip flap though. That bothered me. Also, I see a few repeated scenes that add no particular effect and at the end, you used a part of the opening that had the credits on it.
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Re: Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

Post by lloyd9988 » Wed May 25, 2011 8:31 am

Thank you, I'm not sure what lip flap is but I get what your saying.

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Re: Clannad ~Bitter Sweet~

Post by TritioAFB » Wed May 25, 2011 9:09 am

Lip Flap means that in the vid seemed like you tried to Lip Synch, but the scene is not fitting very well the moment, you know "talking scenes" in moments where there's no voice for example

And about the first video, Liked it but you'll have to keep working in the flow
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