I like the song a lot, and it can be used with a variety of different anime, but it takes a lot to make the two sources actually look well together. When they don't compliment each other as well, it usually means something is missing, for me. Particularly in the editing, or because the two are just stale together. In this case, I thought they were stale. I'm not going to tell you you should have used a different anime or song, because that's stupid. It's totally up to you what you want to edit to. But I am going to tell you why I thought it was "stale."
The editing itself was very simple. I don't think it should have been as simple. It was definitely kind of boring for me, and so I feel you could have spiced it up somehow. I don't know how, so I feel bad for saying that, but it's just something you can look at for yourself.

Next, there were some transitions that were a little coarse. Particularly at 28-30. Fade in or something, I don't know. But there is no beat where you introduced the next clip, so it was really sudden and awkward. This happens a lot throughout the video.
Next, the clip choice. A lot of the time the clip choice kept the two sources you used very distant. I didn't feel a connection between them at all. One, the lyrics and the clips. A lot of the time the clips didn't fit the lyrics. Actually, most of the time.

Lastly, that song cut. That was a really bad song cut at the end. Plus, that's where everything basically died. It was just a bunch of slow clips of everything ending after that.
That was a really bad review, in my opinion. I'm always so bad going into all of the technical stuff.

3/5
I feel bad for giving you a lower-ish rating, but all I can say as a last note is that it was really boring for me, as the viewer. And as someone who actually likes this song, I'm kind of biased and picky.