Video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ero7Jpf3V6
It's rll old over 1 year but i hope you can enjoy
Number One
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EkaCoralian
- Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:01 am
- Status: Trying to get the time to edit. x_x;
- Location: Canada
Re: Number One
Not bad. The lyrics didn't really fit the clip choice in the beginning, but it got better.
Also, there were moments when subs appeared. Avoid if possible for future reference.
Nice timing and use of effects.
Also, there were moments when subs appeared. Avoid if possible for future reference.
Nice timing and use of effects.
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LeX
- Joined: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:23 pm
- Status: M'king Music
Re: Number One
thank youEkaCoralian wrote:Not bad. The lyrics didn't really fit the clip choice in the beginning, but it got better.
Also, there were moments when subs appeared. Avoid if possible for future reference.
Nice timing and use of effects.
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LittleAtari
- Call Me Moneybagz
- Joined: Sun May 22, 2005 10:23 pm
Re: Number One
song and source matched well
I must say that there were some pretty interesting sync choices in this. I mainly like your use of internal sync
I'd say some weak points to focus on would be to acknowledge song changes a little more in your editing and scene selection. Your editing/sync was a little too consistent along with the motion of the scenes used it made the entire video feel the same throughout it even when the song changed pace.
Also audio is editing is just as important as video editing, make sure that your song cuts sound natural next time. Jarring song cuts can disrupt the flow of your video.
As for subtitles, avoid them at all costs. If you cant work with DVDs or RAWs, at least crop them out or something.
While this video isn't 'ZOMG AMAZING FIVESTARS' material, there's a lot of good material in this that makes me think that with more practice, you'll be an editor that I'll grow to like in a few months just because I really liked your internal sync.
Keep going and I better see you release more videos here
I must say that there were some pretty interesting sync choices in this. I mainly like your use of internal sync
I'd say some weak points to focus on would be to acknowledge song changes a little more in your editing and scene selection. Your editing/sync was a little too consistent along with the motion of the scenes used it made the entire video feel the same throughout it even when the song changed pace.
Also audio is editing is just as important as video editing, make sure that your song cuts sound natural next time. Jarring song cuts can disrupt the flow of your video.
As for subtitles, avoid them at all costs. If you cant work with DVDs or RAWs, at least crop them out or something.
While this video isn't 'ZOMG AMAZING FIVESTARS' material, there's a lot of good material in this that makes me think that with more practice, you'll be an editor that I'll grow to like in a few months just because I really liked your internal sync.
Keep going and I better see you release more videos here
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LeX
- Joined: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:23 pm
- Status: M'king Music
Re: Number One
thank you for this vital comment!LittleAtari wrote:song and source matched well
I must say that there were some pretty interesting sync choices in this. I mainly like your use of internal sync
I'd say some weak points to focus on would be to acknowledge song changes a little more in your editing and scene selection. Your editing/sync was a little too consistent along with the motion of the scenes used it made the entire video feel the same throughout it even when the song changed pace.
Also audio is editing is just as important as video editing, make sure that your song cuts sound natural next time. Jarring song cuts can disrupt the flow of your video.
As for subtitles, avoid them at all costs. If you cant work with DVDs or RAWs, at least crop them out or something.
While this video isn't 'ZOMG AMAZING FIVESTARS' material, there's a lot of good material in this that makes me think that with more practice, you'll be an editor that I'll grow to like in a few months just because I really liked your internal sync.
Keep going and I better see you release more videos here
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Phantasmagoriat
- Joined: Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:26 pm
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Re: Number One
Yeah, that was pretty decent 
It wasn't overly showy, and was nice basic action.
Get better, and maybe experiment with different anime/music/stuff...
It wasn't overly showy, and was nice basic action.
Get better, and maybe experiment with different anime/music/stuff...
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LeX
- Joined: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:23 pm
- Status: M'king Music
Re: Number One
I up in this Moment a One Piece Video xP and thanksPhantasmagoriat wrote:Yeah, that was pretty decent
It wasn't overly showy, and was nice basic action.
Get better, and maybe experiment with different anime/music/stuff...