My Anime (redo)
- Otohiko
- Joined: Mon May 05, 2003 8:32 pm
*sigh*
It's a neat drawing, but it'll be very difficult for people to take something like this as a serious 'anime'. It's not up to par with what we've been considering to be professional-level character design in the last... 40 years or so.
In other words, needs work. A lot of work
It's a neat drawing, but it'll be very difficult for people to take something like this as a serious 'anime'. It's not up to par with what we've been considering to be professional-level character design in the last... 40 years or so.
In other words, needs work. A lot of work

The Birds are using humanity in order to throw something terrifying at this green pig. And then what happens to us all later, that’s simply not important to them…
- Blackwatch
- Joined: Sat Sep 04, 2004 10:18 am
- Location: kickin my brothers ass.
- Otohiko
- Joined: Mon May 05, 2003 8:32 pm
Well, still, I think you can make better rough drafts...
(or perhaps I'm expecting too much)
Anyway, story-wise, yeah, more in that direction now would be of substance.
(or perhaps I'm expecting too much)
Anyway, story-wise, yeah, more in that direction now would be of substance.

The Birds are using humanity in order to throw something terrifying at this green pig. And then what happens to us all later, that’s simply not important to them…
- android21
- Joined: Mon Jul 14, 2003 11:55 am
- Location: dragon slaying....
more storyline. as the girl (nalee) and her friends play trough the games they find a boy who's acctually 30 years old but his bodimage never aged. he tells them that theres only one year left until war scarred reality and also thaches them that they can alter there digital bodies to fit the game standards.
if it kicks ass i like it.
if it gets someone else to kick ass for it i love it.
if it gets someone else to kick ass for it i love it.

- Arigatomina
- Joined: Thu Apr 03, 2003 3:04 am
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I never liked Reboot much, or Hack for that matter, but this sounds like a bonefied mix of the two, maybe with some Lain added in for spice.android21 wrote:more storyline. as the girl (nalee) and her friends play trough the games they find a boy who's acctually 30 years old but his bodimage never aged. he tells them that theres only one year left until war scarred reality and also thaches them that they can alter there digital bodies to fit the game standards.
Is there anything in this anime that can't be found in another anime/cartoon? I mean, what's the original gimmic? If the games are very original and interesting, they'd work as your gimmic. The storyline itself sounds like "Hack gets a virus and is sucked into Reboot and must now go from game to game hoping to get out before the bad guys from Lain come and destroy their bodies."
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- Joined: Wed Feb 19, 2003 12:22 am
- Location: Fort Collins, CO
this is a gary paulsen book...
I had an anime idea once to, it was this guy who goes to visit his dad in canada, but the plane pilot dies of a heart attack and he spends 6 months in the wilderness with only his hatchet to keep him alive...
but then I found out it was another gary paulsen book
I always wanted to see a series that kind of involves a mad max type future, you know? (there probably is huh?)
I had an anime idea once to, it was this guy who goes to visit his dad in canada, but the plane pilot dies of a heart attack and he spends 6 months in the wilderness with only his hatchet to keep him alive...
but then I found out it was another gary paulsen book
I always wanted to see a series that kind of involves a mad max type future, you know? (there probably is huh?)