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android21
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Post by android21 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:47 am

Okay now try it.
if it kicks ass i like it.
if it gets someone else to kick ass for it i love it.:)

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Post by angelx03 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:50 am

The drawings are just rough drafts, right?
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Post by android21 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:51 am

Yeah i drew em in like 30 seconds...
if it kicks ass i like it.
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Post by Otohiko » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:52 am

*sigh*

It's a neat drawing, but it'll be very difficult for people to take something like this as a serious 'anime'. It's not up to par with what we've been considering to be professional-level character design in the last... 40 years or so.

In other words, needs work. A lot of work :roll:
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Post by android21 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:54 am

two words... ROUGH DRAFTS


these are like shells of the charicters as i draw thwm i add stuff just not on these.
if it kicks ass i like it.
if it gets someone else to kick ass for it i love it.:)

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Post by Blackwatch » Sun Sep 05, 2004 12:16 pm

Cool drawings. I draw stick figures... So tell us more about the story.
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Post by Otohiko » Sun Sep 05, 2004 2:19 pm

Well, still, I think you can make better rough drafts...

(or perhaps I'm expecting too much)

Anyway, story-wise, yeah, more in that direction now would be of substance. :roll:
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Post by android21 » Sun Sep 05, 2004 4:01 pm

more storyline. as the girl (nalee) and her friends play trough the games they find a boy who's acctually 30 years old but his bodimage never aged. he tells them that theres only one year left until war scarred reality and also thaches them that they can alter there digital bodies to fit the game standards.
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Post by Arigatomina » Sun Sep 05, 2004 5:04 pm

android21 wrote:more storyline. as the girl (nalee) and her friends play trough the games they find a boy who's acctually 30 years old but his bodimage never aged. he tells them that theres only one year left until war scarred reality and also thaches them that they can alter there digital bodies to fit the game standards.
I never liked Reboot much, or Hack for that matter, but this sounds like a bonefied mix of the two, maybe with some Lain added in for spice.

Is there anything in this anime that can't be found in another anime/cartoon? I mean, what's the original gimmic? If the games are very original and interesting, they'd work as your gimmic. The storyline itself sounds like "Hack gets a virus and is sucked into Reboot and must now go from game to game hoping to get out before the bad guys from Lain come and destroy their bodies."

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Post by Alpha_Hazard » Sun Sep 05, 2004 6:45 pm

this is a gary paulsen book...

I had an anime idea once to, it was this guy who goes to visit his dad in canada, but the plane pilot dies of a heart attack and he spends 6 months in the wilderness with only his hatchet to keep him alive...

but then I found out it was another gary paulsen book

I always wanted to see a series that kind of involves a mad max type future, you know? (there probably is huh?)

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