kireblue wrote:I feel that the initial buildup in your video needed more scene variation and you spent way too much time on the snow scene. Also, the cross effect/ zooms that you kept using were extremely jarring and kept breaking the mood and atmosphere that you were building. But even so, I see what you were trying to do, and the sources seemed to complement each other pretty well.
yea i am working on improving how i use these effect
but i will improve on how to use it soo that its not jarring xD thx for sharing your opinion
it will help me alot