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Post by Dalto_123 » Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:41 pm

Hey guys have not made a video in a while so here it is.

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Please leave some comments I am problly really rusty so leave some pointers.
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Post by Autraya » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:34 am

hmmm well there are some serious visual quality problems maybe try and avi xvid or h.264 encode insteam of wmv.

I'm not sure what the long white screen around .18 is for?

although there are sync issues your overall flow is pretty good and the song matches the game quite well.
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by Niotex » Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:30 am

3/5
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Post by Kevmaster » Fri Apr 06, 2007 7:45 am

Niotex wrote:3/5
haha -_-
no..seriously..I find this funny


1/5

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Post by Dalto_123 » Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:48 am

Autraya: Well I cant save avi to what I know. I use windows movie maker so what I can do is limited. If I want to do any good effects I have to make them in photoshop frame by frame. As for the white They walk into the door of light so it gose white but I made it longer on purpose. Reason is in the lyrics it say's "Turn it inside out so that I can see" then it fades out to the water so its kinda turns the white inside out so you can see whats going on behind it. It fades to the water because she says"The part of you thats drifting over me" so I chose that sceen because it looks like your drifting over the water.

Niotex: allthough I like geting rateings out of numbers. It dosen't tell me much of anything about what needs to be fixed.

Kevmasterflashdeluxe: Same thing give me the reasons so I can fix it.
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Post by JaddziaDax » Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:03 am

Dalto_123 wrote:Autraya: Well I cant save avi to what I know. I use windows movie maker so what I can do is limited.
uh yes you can:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... setup.html
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... xport.html
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/avtech/xvid.html
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... audio.html

all found in Read <a href=http://www.a-m-v.org/guides/avtech31/>ErMaC & AbsoluteDestiny's Friendly AMV Guides</a>..
If I want to do any good effects I have to make them in photoshop frame by frame.
thats what he did on most of his last video... O.o its a long difficult process but usually worth it in the end O.o
(or you can get a different program)

ps. i havent seen your video yet O.o

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Post by Dalto_123 » Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:31 am

lol thanks and yeah it is worth it most the time and I will try to those links and check it out.
Allso I would apreciate it if you would watch it.
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Post by JaddziaDax » Fri Apr 06, 2007 10:53 am

first of all you shouldnt really have to worry about doing effects anyways... what i would do if i were you is work on flow, and movement... try to match the movement of the visuals to the movement of the song

not to mention, the song doesnt scream "effects" at me O.o (i know this song practically inside and out, i used to work at a place where a 5'8 chicken would sing it every hour O.o and amazingly i still dont hate the song)

I agree with Autraya that the whiteflash shouldnt have lasted that long.... ive had people get onto me about leaving "black" randomly in for a certain ammount of time, and the truth is that can easily loose the (A.D.D.) audience O.o
try to always have something happening in the video, and try to not leave blank spots (any solid color is a blank) I understand your attempt at following the lyrics, but i think you could have found something to go there...

a larger resolution would be nice... O.o the video is currently about the size of my preview screen O.o but i know some people leave them this small because they have internet issues... or like slow connections O.o i donno i perfer larger resolution O.o

it was a good concept, best i can say is try to work on movement and how it connects to the song

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Post by Autraya » Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:54 pm

rubber chicken singing.....?
my you've had some colourful experiences Dax.

oh yeah and what she said X2
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by JaddziaDax » Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:22 am

not rubber, more like anamatronic... i used to work at a Chuck E Cheese.. the only female character is a chicken... its like a kiddie pizza place... O.o

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