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[WIP] ReXMaster - Birth Of A Hero Preview

Post by ReXMaster » Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:45 pm

its not the hole video yet it just a preview of it this is as far as i got ^^
i hope u like what i did so far ^^

Editing Software: Adobe premier pro 1.5
Anime: Berseck
Song: Tvangeste - Birth of a Hero
Studio: CB-R
Link: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=137416

i hope u guys like it so far please tell me if u want me to change anything in it cause its still in editing ^^

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Post by ReXMaster » Wed Jan 24, 2007 8:02 pm

lol come on guys i need some feed back ^^

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Post by Shinodude » Wed Jan 24, 2007 8:38 pm

not sopposed to uplode videos if they are not the final product

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Post by bob64 » Thu Jan 25, 2007 12:22 am

Yeah, like they said, your not supposed to upload AMVs to the local server unless they're final versions.

Anyway, some of the fast paced drumming sections do not sync up with the video (video is too slow at some places) Noticable at 00:16, and many other places.

flashing the same scene over and over for a sequence of drum beats takes away from the fast-paced effect that I think your trying to go for... alot more work though.

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Post by bob64 » Sat Jan 27, 2007 2:38 am

00:06 super-fast drumming, video flashes a bit too fast, doesn't match exactly.
00:08 where the guy fades out
00:14 the scene change matches the guitar instead of the drum, which is odd.
00:18 the scene change should match the violin note change
00:23 the scene change is a bit too slow, move it up so it matches the violin a bit more. (a good example is 00:24, with the eye... )
00:24 the eye scene, as it fades where he turns his head isnt good, it looks like a bugged frame.
00:26 this fade is too early or too fast. move it back or make it longer.
00:31 you got a "bugged frame" because it switches scenes as it fades out... giving a flash of knights swinging something
00:32, scene cut too early. doesn't sync with music, move it back a half-second or so
00:44 missing some flashes, drumming starts but your video doesn't respond until a half-second later.
00:48 flash-scene-changes too slow, the spacing between the next scene is too wide, it doesn't match the drumming well


... I'm not going to re-do your entire video for you.

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Post by ReXMaster » Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:25 am

well ok man.... if u dont want to that ok thanks for the help man ^^

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