Well, this is my first AMV. Feedback or constructive criticism would be appreciated as I would like to continue to do this and I would love to be able to improve. I do plan on remaking this one (or at least making a new one with the same general feel) once I gain more experience and get better.
Video: Introspection
Anime: .hack//sign
Song: Lost
Artist: VAST
Link:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=137037
.hack//sign - Introspection
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WC Annihilus
- Joined: Wed Jan 17, 2007 10:49 pm
.hack//sign - Introspection
Last edited by WC Annihilus on Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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bombush
- Joined: Sat Sep 10, 2005 10:39 am
It was nice. Especially as your first video. I really liked it. But there are few things that would be better to improve in one of your next videos. Fist of all - try to get rid of subtitles. Although they sometimes looked like they are a part of the video, they are often just distracting. Also some scenes are too long, even for such a slow-paced song.
The transition at 00:01:56 looked a little out of place at first... maybe if it was a little better synced to the music...
That would be all. Good luck with your next projects.
The transition at 00:01:56 looked a little out of place at first... maybe if it was a little better synced to the music...
That would be all. Good luck with your next projects.
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WC Annihilus
- Joined: Wed Jan 17, 2007 10:49 pm
Ooh, a reply 
I have to say, when I made this, I was ridiculously naive in terms of AMVs (not that I'm much better off now 
) Totally agree with you on all of those points. And to be honest, I probably only spent maybe 5 hours, half of which was spent staring into space 
I started to rush things, throwing stuff in cause I just wanted to get it done. But now I'm educated thanks to this place I'm not going to start my next one till summertime or something so I have all the time I need, plus going to get DVDs this time
I have to say, when I made this, I was ridiculously naive in terms of AMVs (not that I'm much better off now ) Totally agree with you on all of those points. And to be honest, I probably only spent maybe 5 hours, half of which was spent staring into space I started to rush things, throwing stuff in cause I just wanted to get it done. But now I'm educated thanks to this place I'm not going to start my next one till summertime or something so I have all the time I need, plus going to get DVDs this time