Fate/Stay Night AMV - Kimi ga Nozomu Tenshi

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Darush
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Fate/Stay Night AMV - Kimi ga Nozomu Tenshi

Post by Darush » Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:17 am

Just uploaded my latest AMV featuring Fate/Stay Night called Kimi Ga Nozomu Tenshi . All are welcome to view it and here's hoping it will tickle your taste buds.

It gives off a different feel for Fate/Stay Night. Well I know that when people watch AMV's they rate it on certain criteria, so I tried to make it somewhat professionally done but my ultimate goal was to make the video enjoyable to watch by using interesting scenes that try and match the song as best as humanly possible.

The idea came to me as soon as I heard the song. I suddenly thought to myself... "Fate/Stay Night + Nightwish = Brilliant AMV", so here is the final product of all my efforts.

I would really like to find out your thoughts on the AMV, so please leave your own opinions of it.
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Post by Kalium » Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:40 am

Interesting matchup.

OK, a few things. First, what song do you use for your intro? Those are some seriously cool riffs.

Second, I have to take issue with your use of little colored boxes to maintain audio synch. It's cheap, it's lazy, and you could have done a lot better with a series of fast cuts. As is, the little squares don't do enough to maintain pace. You do it other places, so why not those too? It would do wonders for your pacing.

Third, some scenes I think you just mishandled, like the bit with the moans starting from 3:19.

Fourth, this video is damn near incoherent. I watched all of F/S N, and I have pretty much no idea what's going on here.

The only real bright spot is that you have a decent sense of timing. Not a bad effort all told, but marred by some major issues. Two of five.

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Post by Darush » Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:19 pm

OK first up, the song I used was from Tokyo Mew Mew called Zankuro Transform which I did a quick edit for use in my intro.

Secondly I would like to thank you for all the pointers you mentioned for my vid. It will help me plan for future projects.
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Post by Niwa » Sun Jan 07, 2007 3:23 pm

Il take a look on this 8-)
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