Need help with a "Please Teacher!" AMV.

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Need help with a "Please Teacher!" AMV.

Post by RamonesFan2020204 » Mon Aug 21, 2006 9:47 pm

Okay, today I started work on a new "Please Teacher!" AMV, and for the song I'm using, I can't think of a good scene to fit the lyrics that go:

Girl, you're looking fine tonight,
and every guy has got you in his sights


Any suggestions? I know scenes where Mizuho and Kei are together in the night time, but I don't know any with other guys looking at her or something similar to that. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
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Post by wurpess » Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:36 pm

Girl, you're looking fine tonight,-Maybe when Mizuho telephatically undoes her top, or on the beach in the bikini

and every guy has got you in his sights-Maybe either when She first comes to the school and walks in the room, or even the vacation/honeymoon thing would work.
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Post by RamonesFan2020204 » Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:37 pm

wurpess wrote:Girl, you're looking fine tonight,-Maybe when Mizuho telephatically undoes her top, or on the beach in the bikini

and every guy has got you in his sights-Maybe either when She first comes to the school and walks in the room, or even the vacation/honeymoon thing would work.

Nice, but when she's on the beach in the bikini, it's day time.
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Post by Afrognamedglen » Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:17 pm

These are lyrics from Jeff Healey’s “Angel eyes”, correct?

Well I’d try starting with a scene (sunset?) in which they are walking together, smiling, and Kei suddenly stops (end of those two lines) and Mizuho gets a few steps ahead, (tight shot of Kei’s face looking down or a waist high shot of her stepping away) cut/fade to shot of him looking back up at her, then cut/fade to her from his point of view (start of chorus).

I’d try to make it seem as if Kei has suddenly thought in his mind, “Am I the guy that’s walking next to you? It has to be someone else, how can someone like ME be with someone like YOU?” I’d try to make it seem as if he feels like one of “those guy’s” looking at her. As I see it my head, it would help flow into the lines of the song.

Well that’s one of the ways I’d try to approach it, I don’t know if you’d or anyone else would think it would work.

Good luck with your AMV though, look forward to checking it out.

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