One Honest Op For Anotha'
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- RajinAsian
- Joined: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:41 pm
- Location: VA
One Honest Op For Anotha'
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=114768
Please, if you watch it and decide to trade opinions with me, I ask that you give me good advice more than anything. I know it's not great, but I see it as a good stepping stone to what I have practiced.
The beginning starts slow in an attempt as not to waste fight scenes nor repeating scenes and I as well wished to introduce the main fighter characters. The end picks up and I think svaes it from being a piece of crap.
So with that in mind tell me what I should change about my style, transitions, and cutting. Flame it if you wish, I learn from anything as long as it aint, 'c00l stu4f'.
Please, if you watch it and decide to trade opinions with me, I ask that you give me good advice more than anything. I know it's not great, but I see it as a good stepping stone to what I have practiced.
The beginning starts slow in an attempt as not to waste fight scenes nor repeating scenes and I as well wished to introduce the main fighter characters. The end picks up and I think svaes it from being a piece of crap.
So with that in mind tell me what I should change about my style, transitions, and cutting. Flame it if you wish, I learn from anything as long as it aint, 'c00l stu4f'.
- sasuke2468
- Joined: Sat Aug 21, 2004 8:34 pm
- Location: Six feet under the ground covered in dirt
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- RajinAsian
- Joined: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:41 pm
- Location: VA
- RajinAsian
- Joined: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:41 pm
- Location: VA
Left it for you.
For an expanded response. It was amazing and rather motivatign as it is alot of times seeing the many editors here who are far more experienced than myself.
The only thing I had a problem with was the end, I was so into the fight sequences and music I was hoping it would end with the final Omnislash, but a good ending none the less.
For an expanded response. It was amazing and rather motivatign as it is alot of times seeing the many editors here who are far more experienced than myself.
The only thing I had a problem with was the end, I was so into the fight sequences and music I was hoping it would end with the final Omnislash, but a good ending none the less.
- sasuke2468
- Joined: Sat Aug 21, 2004 8:34 pm
- Location: Six feet under the ground covered in dirt
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- RajinAsian
- Joined: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:41 pm
- Location: VA
- sasuke2468
- Joined: Sat Aug 21, 2004 8:34 pm
- Location: Six feet under the ground covered in dirt
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- RajinAsian
- Joined: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:41 pm
- Location: VA
- Devil^Shin
- Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:57 pm
- Status: Noble Devil
- Location: Sofia, Bulgaria
yo i'll do op exchange with you
here's mine amv :
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=112351
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=112351
Even if the morrow is barren of promises, nothing shall forstall my return.
To become the dew that quenches the land, To spare the sands, the seas, the skies, I offer thee this silent sacrifice.
To become the dew that quenches the land, To spare the sands, the seas, the skies, I offer thee this silent sacrifice.
