a pink little dinosaur (first vid)

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a pink little dinosaur (first vid)

Post by Mrs Pilkington » Fri Oct 07, 2005 5:33 pm

^-^ So, I shall now grace all of you with the presence of my first video! ><; Try not to be blinded or anything. I am not responsible for any injuries that are caused by the vid.... :twisted:

....yes, I know that most of you shall cry by the song...but fear not! waait...yes...fear it. I have no idea ><;


I'm crazy. @_@



click here!!!!!!!!!!eleven!o_O;

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Post by Mr Pilkington » Sat Oct 08, 2005 4:07 pm

I loved it! It gets my seal of approval and two big :up: :up:


As well as a few :-*

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Post by Corran » Sat Oct 08, 2005 7:18 pm

I thought it was good for a first video. You did a good job hitting key beats and maintaining the mood of the video in your selection of clips.

A few things to work on:
  • The video quality was pretty bad in parts and there were interlacing issues in spots. Hopefully Phil can help you out with that stuff. ;)
  • Maybe it is because I overuse the damn things but this video could use some crossfades, pans, and zooms to help the flow of the video.
  • Regarding flow I think some scenes dragged on too long. This isn't to say they should change quicker but rather there could simply be more going on. For example: the scene where he is reading the letter (00:34 to 00:42) you could flash in and out some video relevant to the lyrics on top of that scene with some masks.
I'm not sure what program you are using so I don't know how helpful that advice is but perhaps Phil can help you out there too.

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Post by OtakuForLife » Sat Oct 08, 2005 8:03 pm

That was awsome... Damn me for being a sap and loving that series so much.

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Post by Lone Wolf » Sun Oct 09, 2005 11:02 pm

Ooh...the Mrs steps up to the plate! :D I shall get it!
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Post by Lone Wolf » Sun Oct 09, 2005 11:15 pm

=O

Wow! That was really good! I do agree with some of the things that Corran said, but I still liked it a lot!

+1 for Team Chaotic Bad Raptor
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Post by Mrs Pilkington » Mon Oct 10, 2005 10:58 am

Mr Pilkington wrote:I loved it! It gets my seal of approval and two big :up: :up:


As well as a few :-*
XD You have no choice but to love it ><;;; :-*

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Post by Mrs Pilkington » Mon Oct 10, 2005 10:59 am

OtakuForLife wrote:That was awsome... Damn me for being a sap and loving that series so much.

Thankies...you may join the sap club....T-T I'm obviously a sap or I wouldn't be making such squishie vids... ^-^ :D

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Post by Mrs Pilkington » Mon Oct 10, 2005 11:02 am

Corran wrote:I thought it was good for a first video. You did a good job hitting key beats and maintaining the mood of the video in your selection of clips.

A few things to work on:
  • The video quality was pretty bad in parts and there were interlacing issues in spots. Hopefully Phil can help you out with that stuff. ;)
  • Maybe it is because I overuse the damn things but this video could use some crossfades, pans, and zooms to help the flow of the video.
  • Regarding flow I think some scenes dragged on too long. This isn't to say they should change quicker but rather there could simply be more going on. For example: the scene where he is reading the letter (00:34 to 00:42) you could flash in and out some video relevant to the lyrics on top of that scene with some masks.
I'm not sure what program you are using so I don't know how helpful that advice is but perhaps Phil can help you out there too.
~thanks for the advice...it really is helpful. I'm still trying to pick up on lots of things. Yeah, Phil has been forced to help out ><;

Lone Wolf wrote:=O

Wow! That was really good! I do agree with some of the things that Corran said, but I still liked it a lot!

+1 for Team Chaotic Bad Raptor
thankies! ><; (i'm spazzing today...) so +1...is this supposed to be like a RPG game or something...extra points for new/good editors?

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