Well this is my first AMV ever, Im am trying to improve on what I build so any critique will be greatly appreciated.
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My First AMV
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- Niotex
- The Phantom Canine
- Joined: Sun Jun 08, 2003 1:54 pm
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- Location: Netherlands
oke basicly i can tell you did this just cause you liked the show and you liked the track... true no? yes im correct thnQ ^^ anyway first off repeated fotage is a very very VERY bad thing to do so i wouldnt recomend doing that again EVER. Something that got my attention straight away was the long cuts and just well the small amount of source used... basicly it was just the scene from the show speeded up a little by taking out some of the stuff to match the length of the track wich is also a very bad thing to do except if it fits perfect wich is for some resson never (god knows why) anyway i didnt feel a combination between the fotage and the track at all like i said in my first comment its just cause you liked the track and anime (cant blame you im a MSI fan myself) this is just something you gotta learn over time but that aside your editing well it could rather say shortening of the source could be alot better even though this is your first video im not gonna see that as a excuse... you should try and get the attention of the viewer by bringing in some timing factors at least try for instance to keep the differant parts of the song differant and just also do something differant with your video cause when haruko was rolling on the round and it kicked back you could have easely switched it to the trowing up helmet sequence... these are just minor details i guese for you right now but they are the key to creating a good video... I personaly dont think this might have helped alot but hey its gotta start somewhere right ^^
