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pulsr
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my first amv weeeee

Post by pulsr » Fri Sep 02, 2005 10:39 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=87376

uhhhh info its a school rumble thing, i was trying to have fun with premiere and this is what ended up happening i still dont know how to encode into xvid.. =( uhh do enjoy though! critique me por favor

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Post by Patroxx » Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:22 am

This is pretty good for just being yor first AMV.
You actually watched for (lip-)sync
Also interesting are the two... cheerleaders in both lower corners ... although they really got on my nerves after 2 minutes :D - perhaps get rid of something in the next vid ;)

All in all an enjoyable video!
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Post by angelx03 » Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:41 am

Yeah, the chearing Tenmas at the bottom corners were pretty distracting (they make good animated avatars though :roll:). The lip-sync wasn't totally solid at some points, but good attempt though.

Concept is hot; makes me want to watch School Rumble so badly (stupid Media Factory for going against fansubbers :x ).
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Post by Knowname » Sat Sep 03, 2005 12:38 pm

Yea, excelant video, wished the cheerleaders floated across the screen or something instead of just being confined to their little boxes. I mean, I could see they were there to liven up the video as the main focus is just way to straight forward, a good idea there. But my, and I'm sure the others, complaint is that they are rather counterproductive after a minute and just become dull after too long. Moving them around and using a transparency on them, I think, would have done it... at least for a bit.

But, as for this over opinionated bastard I enjoyed it and I don't do that for too many first amvs, not because their first amvs but because they suck ;p. I recomend this one, with a little more polish (and a MUCH more catchy announcement title..) I think you could make a great video.

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Post by pulsr » Sat Sep 03, 2005 12:44 pm

hehe, i had tenma there because i wanted to make sure if i could match the beat of the drums. next time ill hopefully do something not as repetitive ;p

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