Do you mean the opening bit? I think the problem there is that the smoke is too much stencil-ish. I think something 'thinner' and more variably transparent would be better... but Bebop with all the smoking might be a good place to look.pen-pen2002 wrote: Jasper-Isis: Also off topic, doesn't Cowboy Bebop have a scene with a tendril of smoke obn a black background? You should make a thread in AMV suggestions and see if anyone can help you out.
Uh. I'm not Jasper though. Really

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I've recently been preoccupied with my modding projects, but these should all be released in just a couple of days, with the fallout probably settling shortly. All in all, I have the time to finish my segment soon though. I'm not 100% sure what you'll have with the title by the end of it all, Pen-Pen - so I'm sort of holding off on that. Otherwise, I think my segment could be finished and sent on only 24 hours notice.