Revised, Revised Beta:
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Jasper-Isis wrote:1. The fade-to-black of the 1:40 clip might look better if you coincide it with the drums that come in at that time. That is, try starting the fade at the very first drum beat.
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Jasper-Isis wrote:2. I like your slides at the very end. However, they seem to become more rushed as the track approaches its end. Can you tweak them so that they come in at slightly more equal intervals?
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Jasper-Isis wrote:3. Your overlay work at 1:21 looks cool! But the shifting images stick out because, well, they don't seem to be synched with anything. They seem to be going a little too fast.
They are synced. To the 'do de do de dewlewdew' part. I made some slight changes, I may adjust more. But, if stretch them out much more, they really won't be synced to anything.
Jasper-Isis wrote:Oh, and also, since you've found that it's possible to zoom in without destroying the footage, perhaps you can try a more dramatic setting at 0:55-1:01. Like, maybe zooming to 120% for each of the clips?
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Jasper-Isis wrote:You're almost done! Hooray.
Almost done? My segment was perfect since the first full beta. It's just, you know, more perfect now.
