Opinions and Suggestions welcome (Full Moon)

[Nekotic]

Seeing as mainly about Full Moon Wo Sagashite there are select few good ones. I, myself although have the episodes on hand my computer does not like to....well lets say cooperate well.

Meaning blantantly, I can't get rid of the subs and my computer sucks.

Recently, I heard of Kelly Clarkson's 'Behind These Hazel Eyes' and one verse struck me quite well.

'Now I can't breathe
No I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on'

Then again while I was on a craving of rewatching the anime, I thought of Mitsuki's predicament. It'd be a very dramatic song, then again mainly showing her realization of Eichi.

Seeing as she is missing Eichi, she is trying to prove her promise to him, all for nought as he's actually dead. So although she was trying to change her fate, it tears her to shreds as slowly Takuto works her way in.

Point taken, Mitsuki doesn't have hazel eyes but it'll work out. Opinions help? I'm really taken and determined to see this through but Adobe Premiere Pro doesn't wish to cooperate with me.

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Seems like just yesterday
You were a part of me
I used to stand so tall
I used to be so strong
Your arms around me tight
Everything it felt so right
Unbreakable like nothing could go wrong

Now I can't breathe
No I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Here I am
Once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it
Can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

I told you everything
Opened up and let you in
You made me feel alright for once in my life
Now all that's left of me
Is what I pretend to be
So together but so broken up inside

Cause I can't breathe
No I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Here I am
Once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it
Can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

Swallow me then spit me out
For hating you, I blame myself
Just seeing you it kills me now
No I don't cry
On the outside anymore

Here I am
Once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it
Can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

Here I am
Once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it
Can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes