1:1 For my Haibane Renmei video

LadyArianrod · Post by **LadyArianrod** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 2:27 pm

Hello, fellow AMV creators. As a beginner I can use all the comments and criticism I can get. I'd appreciate it if someone would look at the following video:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=60119

And rate it if you wish. It's a Haibane Renmei video featuring footage from the first episode. Basically, it's an introduction to the series and a first look at the life of a Haibane. Mainly centered on Rakka.

The song I used is "The Green Bird" by Yoko Kanno (as heard in Cowboy Bebop).

The video is simple, but I was hoping for more opinions/hits. Unfortunately, it didn't receive many, so I'd love to hear what you think. If you do choose to submit an op, I'll review a video of yours that you want feedback for.

Please don't post comments in this thread itself; leave an op in the usual way.

Responses are very much appreciated!

-LadyArianrod

Katrina · Post by **Katrina** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 4:11 pm

I'd be happy to review, but I've only seen up through the 2nd disc of the series. Are there any spoilers beyond that?

LadyArianrod · Post by **LadyArianrod** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 4:28 pm

No, there are no spoilers beyond the first disc.

Thanks!

unx16 · Post by **unx16** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:14 pm

i'll OP your vid, it should be up shortly

heres mine if you'd like to leave an OP, if you do thanks in advance ^_^

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=61020

Katrina · Post by **Katrina** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:00 pm

LadyArianrod wrote:No, there are no spoilers beyond the first disc.

Thanks!

Cool. I'll get right to it, then.

LadyArianrod · Post by **LadyArianrod** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:10 pm

Katrina wrote:
LadyArianrod wrote:No, there are no spoilers beyond the first disc.

Thanks!
Cool. I'll get right to it, then.

Thanks! Are there any vids you want me to review?

Katrina · Post by **Katrina** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:14 pm

Um, probably Karaoke Gone Wrong, it's usually the easiest since it's the only one I have that isn't heavily character or series-centered. Though certainly if you want to review another, I won't complain.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=25183

I hope my review was helpful. Let me know if you want me to elaborate on anything.

LadyArianrod · Post by **LadyArianrod** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:16 pm

Your review was very good. Nothing much to clarify-- it was very clear. oh, and I'll be glad to review your video.

madbunny · Post by **madbunny** » Thu Feb 03, 2005 12:15 am

OP posted.
Nice video.

I like this song, and think it makes a great choice for the show.
Some of my scores were a bit low, but in those cases I tried to explain why I thought that way and to offer advice in those areas, so don't be discouraged by the numbers.

Should you wish to watch any of my videos, take a look in my profile and choose the one that seems to be the best match for you.

LadyArianrod · Post by **LadyArianrod** » Thu Feb 03, 2005 12:47 am

madbunny wrote:OP posted.
Nice video.

I like this song, and think it makes a great choice for the show.
Some of my scores were a bit low, but in those cases I tried to explain why I thought that way and to offer advice in those areas, so don't be discouraged by the numbers.

Should you wish to watch any of my videos, take a look in my profile and choose the one that seems to be the best match for you.

I read your review... wow! Thank you very much for the explanations and criticisms... Each score was justified... I'd rather get average scores with genuine insight than a trite row of tens.

Anyway, I'll look at your videos and choose the most interesting one to review ^__^.

Thanks again!