Ok, I'm new at this, but I would like an opinion for the amv I'm making. This is my first ever attempt at any kind of video editing, so if its crap then i apologize, but I tried...
http://www.angelfire.com/anime6/fuiru_sensei
Its a Saikano amv using 'Dare You To Move' by Switchfoot.
Thanks in advance...
n00b WIP Saikano AMV
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DaCoolGohan
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New video. It is Cowboy Bebop the Movie to Jimmy Eat World's Pain. So Check it out and give me an Opinion and I will Opinion your video. =P
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=54189
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=54189
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AquaSky
- Master of Science
- Joined: Tue Apr 15, 2003 8:06 am
So far, so good. The only things I would point out would be :
The intro sequence is a bit long, and "Our love first began" sounds cut off at the beginning, like it was originally in the middle of a line (if that isn't the case, then maybe moving that line back a bit from the beginning would help). Maybe trimming a bit where he's standing and looking around could let you keep the impact of the intro while shortening it to a reasonable length.
Intro aside, the body of the video looks good. A few bits of lip flap here and there, but other than that, it's surprisingly good for your first video. Keep up the good work.
The intro sequence is a bit long, and "Our love first began" sounds cut off at the beginning, like it was originally in the middle of a line (if that isn't the case, then maybe moving that line back a bit from the beginning would help). Maybe trimming a bit where he's standing and looking around could let you keep the impact of the intro while shortening it to a reasonable length.
Intro aside, the body of the video looks good. A few bits of lip flap here and there, but other than that, it's surprisingly good for your first video. Keep up the good work.
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Fuiru
- Joined: Sat Sep 18, 2004 7:45 pm
- Location: Sydney
Wow thanks alot.
Yeh, about the intro. I started it, but i grew impatient with myself and decided to get right into the actual song. Its just a half arsed cut that i did to try to gain some structure to amv. I must admit it is pretty long though. heh, and about the lip flaps, im not quite sure how to eliminate that from the video. I'm mainly using virtual dub and windows movie maker to compile this video, and im not even too familiar with these programs. So i guess i have to put up with that for now...
Thanks again.
Yeh, about the intro. I started it, but i grew impatient with myself and decided to get right into the actual song. Its just a half arsed cut that i did to try to gain some structure to amv. I must admit it is pretty long though. heh, and about the lip flaps, im not quite sure how to eliminate that from the video. I'm mainly using virtual dub and windows movie maker to compile this video, and im not even too familiar with these programs. So i guess i have to put up with that for now...
Thanks again.
