Go easy, here is my second try. The Opposite of Motherhood

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Go easy, here is my second try. The Opposite of Motherhood

Post by Adv1sor » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:54 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=53335

Real video this time, not just stills :lol:

Hope you like it.

All comments welcome.

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Re: Go easy, here is my second try. The Opposite of Motherho

Post by Wong » Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:30 am

Adv1sor wrote:All comments welcome.
oh trust me...i left one.

Adv1sor wrote:Hope you like it.
i should say the same to you about my op.
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Post by Zarxrax » Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:47 am

Well...

It's certainly an improvement.

...I think.

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Post by Wong » Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:58 am

Zarxrax wrote:Well...

It's certainly an improvement.

...I think.

lol...you know...no matter what Zarx says...i always look at the avatar...and giggle.
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Post by post-it » Sun Nov 07, 2004 2:43 am

. Much better 8-)
the song was cut short, no big deal there.
Timing was pretty-good.
I see nothing wring with this one ^___^ ... another "MAD" AMVer is born.

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Post by Adv1sor » Sun Nov 07, 2004 7:39 am

Thanks for the comments and for the op.

Yes, I know that the song was cut short.

Maybe I'm wrong, but just because a song goes four minutes doesn't necessarily mean that the video should be that long. Rather than repeat the concept, which seems was too vauge and confusing, I ended it at just under two minutes.

Thanks again, I'll try harder on the next one.

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Post by post-it » Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:36 pm

Adv1sor wrote:... Maybe I'm wrong, but just because a song goes four minutes doesn't necessarily mean that the video should be that long ...
. ummm ... nothing say's that you "could not alter the Songs themselves."
I've seen quite a few AMV's where people have made the Song sound "live"
just by adding "the sounds of cheering fans" to the background.. I mean,
nothing says that you can not re-write the Songs & the Video's 8-)

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Post by Adv1sor » Sun Nov 07, 2004 8:05 pm

post-it wrote:ummm ... nothing say's that you "could not alter the Songs themselves.
Thank you, that is a great idea.

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Post by quadir » Tue Nov 09, 2004 11:38 am

Good 2nd amv. Op'ed as well. Visible improvements over the first one.
Great start, and cutting the song short was the right decision. Too many drawn out amv's make this mistake.

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Post by Adv1sor » Wed Nov 10, 2004 8:29 am

Thank you quadir, I really appreciate your helpful comment.

I am working on a third video and will take to heart the suggestions and comments you have given me.

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