my manga

GaavTheDemonDragonKing · Post by **GaavTheDemonDragonKing** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 10:30 am

Wow i dont feel bad about my drawings anymore. Mine is only 2% better than Tsunami Jones drawing. Mine has color ^__^

Trunksgirl07 · Post by **Trunksgirl07** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:33 am

Ok. all of your drawings are really......nice you guys. Not as good as other people that I know but keep working on it.

Oh and regarding the story you still need some development. It was hard to understand the story with all the misspellings and lack of a few words, but it's a rough draft so I'll give you some props. Try to get in more detail to the characters. Like someone said earlier the characters remain the same throughout the whole story. You need to get in some more action.

The characters need to convey more feelings (even if they are demons) or show some type of emotion that tells us that Meyen is part demon/sorceress.

I'm not criticising (might be misspelled no ones perfect!) I'm just putting in my opinion.

Keep working on it.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:43 am

these long posts are just shells. Emotion and action are the things in the actual manga or novel or anime. thats why the season outlines are lacking in those.

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Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 12:24 pm

Hey Oto,

i colored your drawing and put it on my wesite. don't worry it's got your name on it.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 12:29 pm

Zero Beat wrote:Hey Oto,

i colored your drawing and put it on my wesite. don't worry it's got your name on it.

theres sevrarl diffrent colored versions i was trying to decide which colors looked better.

)v(ajin Koji · Post by **)v(ajin Koji** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 1:03 pm

A link would be nice

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 1:16 pm

if you look i already had one to my website but here:

http://groups.msn.com/celestialevolution/_whatsnew.msnw

Click on the albums.

GaavTheDemonDragonKing · Post by **GaavTheDemonDragonKing** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 1:55 pm

hmm......

everything is so perfect

if only i can get stuff done like that everything would be all better for me and i will be famous, but i live a dream and only a dream

Trunksgirl07 · Post by **Trunksgirl07** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 2:38 pm

Ok, the "shell" thing, now I understand. The coloring thing, you need to learn how to color Zero Beat!

J/k....and GaavTheDemonDragonKing just 3 words.....Practice makes perfect!

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 2:46 pm

i just color i didn't know there was a skill level.....