MadBunny does Free Ops again. HE's gone MAD baby!

[bob790]

I'm fairly new at this and would appreciate some constructive criticism of my latest attempt:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=41796
btw it's a comedy.

Very fun video.

I spent an ungodly amount of time transcribing the lyrics to deconstruct all of your scene vs verse segments. The review looks to be about minor novella in length. Feel free to copy and paste them ( the lyrics) from my review to your description if you like.

Anyway, PM me, respond in the video, or here if you have any questions or comments.

I'm glad you liked it and I felt your reveiw was for the most part very fair.

For further details read my less lengthy response to the reveiw.

[madbunny]

I'm fairly new at this and would appreciate some constructive criticism of my latest attempt:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=41796
btw it's a comedy.

Very fun video.

I spent an ungodly amount of time transcribing the lyrics to deconstruct all of your scene vs verse segments. The review looks to be about minor novella in length. Feel free to copy and paste them ( the lyrics) from my review to your description if you like.

Anyway, PM me, respond in the video, or here if you have any questions or comments.

I'm glad you liked it and I felt your reveiw was for the most part very fair.

For further details read my less lengthy response to the reveiw.

I've taken a look at your response and adjusted the scores where you clarified some areas. It seems that at 1:30 AM my grammar could use a bit of editing too, so I'll go back and clean up the comments to reflect the new scores soon. If I remember, I'll quote the original, and detail why the changes. (I'll PM you when I do, so you'll know when something has been changed.)

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Since it's on a new page:

No more video submissions to this thread please, I'm trying to finish it.

[madbunny]

Hey you may enjoy this man its my new video

My vid hope you like it - http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=42351

Done. PM me, or reply if you want an upgrade in the op. I figured with as many as you already have there probably isn't a lot that I could have added.

[TeclmmlEd]

Hey you may enjoy this man its my new video

My vid hope you like it - http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=42351

Done. PM me, or reply if you want an upgrade in the op. I figured with as many as you already have there probably isn't a lot that I could have added.

I allready left you a creators opinion and a PM so go ahead and view both and thx for the op. ^_^

[madbunny]

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=42417

It's both horror and drama... and somewhat dance. Whatever.
As for the kind of op... I'd like it as long as possible, but I don't really mind if you give me something short. I want to be told what I really need to improve.

Hope this fits the bill. Since you said that you were just editing to the rhythymm of the song I didn't do a scene/lyric analysis.
Repond here, there or in PM if you have any comments or complaints.

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No more video submissions to this thread. Comments on comments only. I'm trying to finish it up.

[madbunny]

Liked your last op you gave me soo much that I'm back for more

If you could op my 'fullmetal destruction' vid in my sig that would be great.

Type of op hmmm.... whatever you feel like giving me I'll be grateful for. Thanks in advanced ^_^

Sorry for the long delay in your (and everyone else waiting for one!) Op.

If you want clarification on some details, leave response in the op, here or in PM form.



No more video submissions to this thread please, I'm trying to catch up/finish

[MechaTC]

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=48274

Catagory: Character Profile, Action, Drama

I would like a slightly detailed regular review when you can get to it please. The good, the bad and a few little details. Thank you very much.

[madbunny]

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=48274

Catagory: Character Profile, Action, Drama

I would like a slightly detailed regular review when you can get to it please. The good, the bad and a few little details. Thank you very much.

I'm no longer taking submissions to this thread as I want to get it wrapped up and start up a new one. You can put this in my exchange thread (read the first post on it for details) if you like.

No more video submissions to this thread please