I downloaded your video and here are some of my thoughts.
After watching it the first time my impression was that I really
should have hated it. Westlife? Subtitles? No discernable
story whatsoever?
But I didn't hate it, and watching it a few more times I began
to understand why: it actually flows pretty well. I'm seeing
this jumble of scenes and then an unexpected synch here
are there, very subtle, but enough so that it actually makes
for a more or less coherent amv, as opposed to pure visual
rambling. I'm not sure if you're doing it on purpose, but
either by design or the strength of talent you make a pleasant
sequence of scenes which is something not everyone
can do.
I see you are looking to get rid of subtitles and I wish you
luck with that (since removing subtitles under Windows is
nothing I know about, but there are <a href="
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... >guides</a>).
I think you could make very good videos visually, in
particular if you gain more technical experience. It's
a question mark to me whether you'll actually be able
to do more story-driven amvs, but I do think you have talent.
Cheers!