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Annalisis requested...

Post by Midnyte » Mon Jul 12, 2004 10:42 pm

Can't seem to get any comments elsewhere for this video..

I realize it could be a sensative subject for many, death, especially suicide is usually not handled well for servivors.

But I'd apreaciate any feedback on it.

It sits somewhere in the Serious / Action / Drama area.

Anime: Hellsing
Music: Evenescence - Tourniquet

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=37297

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Post by genestarwind21122 » Mon Jul 12, 2004 10:52 pm

Sure I'll give you an extended op on your video. (1,000 - 1,500 words) If you can op my video called Belldandy's Memories. Here's the link:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=36086

Expect it up sometime tommorow. I'll watch it tonight. But I have college tommorow morning. No work. Thank goodness.

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Post by Midnyte » Mon Jul 12, 2004 11:03 pm

NP, I'll be waiting.

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Post by TeclmmlEd » Mon Jul 12, 2004 11:24 pm

same here ill check out ur vid and op it if you op my vid.

My vid - http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=42351

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Post by TeclmmlEd » Mon Jul 12, 2004 11:36 pm

ok i oped urs now i wait for urs :wink:

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Post by Midnyte » Tue Jul 13, 2004 9:08 am

Should have your ops up by the end of the day... Work bandwidth is at max 1/3 of home :(

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Post by Midnyte » Tue Jul 13, 2004 8:41 pm

Ops are up.
You both did EXCELENT jobs... And I lay somewhere near the ground in your shadows.

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Post by nailz » Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:33 am

That was very poorly put together, had basically little to do with suicide that I could tell, your name flying around the screen was horribly distracting and annoying... and honestly...

"Even in our Darkest Hour, THIER is a glimmer of light? Not only did you use the wrong form of the word, YOU SPELLED IT WRONG. Nice work. I appreciate what you're trying to do with the video, but damn man....
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Post by Midnyte » Wed Jul 14, 2004 7:35 pm

THankyou mister english major. Obviously not a Philosophy major. But thankyou for noticing the the incorrect usage of the word (however purposeful). It means you were paying a great deal of attention.

Maybe too much attention. I once had a teacher that told me I missed the forest because I was too busy examining the leaves.

If you follow through the video, you will notice the main idea is not truly suicide, it is the bond of the torniquet to salvation. Suicide being a sub-idea. The title isn't Seras' Suicide.
But I see how you might have thought that, with the dedication.


genestarwind21122: I'm still waiting. Hope this means a lot of thought going into it.

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Post by genestarwind21122 » Wed Jul 14, 2004 10:49 pm

Schools getting me tied up. I've watched your video and think it is your best amv yet. I'll have a complete breakdown of your amv. I've written down notes on what I want to type but I'll be going section by section like I said. Sorry. I do keep my word though when I say I'll op a video I'll op it. It just takes me sometime with work, college, anime club and preparing for Otakon.
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