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BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 8:46 am

i don´t want to write a book.

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 8:47 am

in the shortness is the spices!!!

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 8:51 am

i can write more , but only if the AMV is very bad and i want to tell every meanness.

i don´t thing that´s the right way. not erveryone loves bad Criticism.
and i say the things short and nicely

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 8:54 am

if you want something like this :
Timing and the music!!!
-0:09-0:24 nice scenes change!!(well timed!)
-0:25-0:29 beautiful scenes change with black lights!!(beautiful!!)
-0:30 Very good lyrical timing!!
-0:40 Nice review to Goku's history when he was a child( fits the lyrics perfectly!!)
-0:42-0:59 the guitar riffs are hit with some well timed zoom ins!!
-1:00-1:05 nice scene change with the black light(Ehm...beautiful!)
-1:06-1:07 fits the lyric very good!!
-1:15 nice scene fit the lyric!!( I thought Goku would wish that he and Vegeta could be brothers!!nice scene!!:D)
-1:23 nice lyric hit!!"feel it everywhere" and scenes from animals and nature are shown!!(beautiful!)
-1:26 lyrical matching!!"blowing with the Wind" and the wind blows over the sea!!(nice)
-1:40 Gohan and Videl are watching up to the sky in the night and the lyric says "on a glory night.."(romanticily!)
-1:44 again a wonderfull lyrical matching!!!Trunks and Goten the "Children of tomorrow"!(great!)
-1:47 Trunks and Goten are sleeping and the lyric says "dream their way..." (sweet,little Trunks and Goten!!:D)
-2:02 Vegeta is walking and the lyric says "walking down the street.."
-2:05 hit of the lyric!!"memories.." shows Vegeta and Nappa when they were young
-2:11 nice scene change
-2:16 nice scene Vegeta is going to the lyric!(:D)
-2:25 "..Change.." Vegeta is turning into a supersaiyan!
-2:27 the drums are hit by scene changes!!(perfect timing!)(thistime!;D)
-2:30 Vegeta is turning into a supersaiyan and the refrain starts"Take me..."(great timing!)
-2:33-2:36 the drums are hit by some flashes of Vegeta,color changes and scene changes!!
-2:39 "where the children of tomorrow.." Trunks and Goten!!:D
-2:45 "You and Me" Goku and Vegeta!!
-2:47 drums are hit very well with scene changes!
-2:56 "on a glory night" a castle night!!(romanticily!)
-2:58 "children of tomorrow.." guess who?? Trunks and Goten

-3:01 agian a sweet hit of the lyrics!!"dream their way.." Trunks and Goten sleeping!!
-3:05 drums are hit by the Fusion to Gotenks!!
-3:08 nice zoom ins!
-3:11 "blow straight" the power of boo blows a wind to Vegeta1
-3:15-3:27 great timing to the music with scene changes!!
-3:28-3:57 the guitar solo is timed perfectly!!!
-3:59 damn emotional start of the refrain!!( Myself was shakin' for emotions!!!)
-4:08 "Trunks and Goten.." what?eh.."Children of tomorrow.."
-4:14 Vegeta and Goku are "you and me"(great lyric hit!!:D)
-4:16 drums are hit perfectly by several scenes!!
-4:19 again the refrain and Goku and Vegeta are doing a fusion to Vegetto!!
-4:27 "Children of tomorrow"!!!(lol guess who??) ;D

Bad -0:01 date???(doesn't really matter but..)
-0:01 I'd like it if there were any music
-0:01-0:08 better put that at the end
-1:09 This lipsynch is good timed but not placed right there!
-1:14 lipsynch doesn't fit at that place!
-1:32 You tried to hit the drums but it hadn't worked really!!:(
-1:51 you should have better tried to hit the drums!:(
-1:58 well again a bad timing to the drums
-2:08 lipsynch doesn't fit at this place!:(
-4:02 color changes doesn't fit there!
-4:06 well lyric match but just a sky at night looks "stupid"!doesn't fit!
-4:41 not a good ending

Well I've to say that you should train to hit the drums better because the drums are often not hit and if you tried to hit the most of them are timed really bad!

General Now I'll try to explain my rating:

Originality 9/10: I'd have given you 10 point if the vid would not be a dbz vid!! But I think 8 or less points are to less because no one else had used that really really emotional song before you!!

Capture 8/10: Simple, no HQ and Realmedia!!But you can watch it very good!!So for a rm file the quality is good!!(Next time please DVD rips!! ;D)

Sound 10/10: I know some poeple don't like this song because of its age but I really like it!!Good old rock!And you choose a song which is really hard to time so you weren't lazy!!

Editing 9/10 : 9 points because this vid has got a really hard song wich is difficult to time!! It's an emotional vid and not an action vid that's the second difficult thing!!Action vids are better timeable than emotional vids!! But not 10 points because the timing isn't perfect!There are some drums that aren't hit!!

Lipsynch 8/10: +10 points for the really good lipsynch the timing is great!! and -2 points for the places you have put the lipsyches into!!They're at the wrong place!(Hope the next time you'll fix that)

Effects 10/10: You used many effects and didn't overuse them!They're timed very good and fit sometimes the lyrics!! My favourite effect is the zoom in and the black light!! They're timed perfectly and they're looking great!!

Effort 10/10: You tried really hard on that vid!! I can see that you tried very hard to hit the lyrics and not every drum and tha's what makes an emotional vid!!Great work!

Overall 9/10: Simple, great timing and music!! Not 10 points because not everything fits really good!

Re-View 10/10: Well I have to say I really like your music taste!!Even if the song is old, but it still is very good!!Sometimes I watch your vid just to bring me up when I'm sad and sometimes I'm just listening to the music!!So it's in use every hour min. 1 time!!!:D

Well at the end a few words!! I'm glad that you join my studio I hope we'll have a great time together as amv creators and aswell as good friends!! So to your vid, it's one of the most emotional vids I've ever seen and I'm really looking forward to your new vids!!
Keep up your good work!!
your
Majin Steve87

say it me!!!

And i´ll write a new!! But í dont thing anybody reads this long text!!

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 9:02 am

No, SORRY!!!

Excuses me , please.

i havent written so much, because so more i write so more textmistakes i do.

And how you see i´m from germany, some thing can´t translatet right and because that i write short OP´s!!

Sorry

Bote · Post by **Bote** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 2:38 pm

5 posts in a row.

Not that much man, but at least something more. I mean overally speaking you know. You don't need to get into details that much. But honestly, 3 lines don't make an op. I hate those short ones. Dunno what to think when I see one

. BTW I can understand you even if you make writting mistakes, you don't make such bad ones.

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BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Wed Mar 31, 2004 4:47 am

i´m new here i don´t know how long it should be!!
HOW??
show an Good OP, please

Bote · Post by **Bote** » Wed Mar 31, 2004 6:22 am

Click on "More Opinion" under some of the videos and you'll see.

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:14 am

BlueSun · Post by **BlueSun** » Thu Apr 01, 2004 11:00 am

and how is it? to long or to short?

i thing its not to long and not to short . it s in the middle.