But that's what revision is for! Whenever I write stuff I ask people who know stuff about the subject matter to read it for me and point out any stuff that seems iffy...that'd be a good way to prevent "Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land" from becoming an imminent threat.DJ_Izumi wrote:My worry is getting the scenario done wrong and basicly creating 'Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land' -.-;;;;ryuu_hime13 wrote:It's an interesting topic! I think you should go for it.
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ryuu_hime13 wrote:But that's what revision is for! Whenever I write stuff I ask people who know stuff about the subject matter to read it for me and point out any stuff that seems iffy...that'd be a good way to prevent "Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land" from becoming an imminent threat.DJ_Izumi wrote:My worry is getting the scenario done wrong and basicly creating 'Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land' -.-;;;;ryuu_hime13 wrote:It's an interesting topic! I think you should go for it.
kill whitey!
paizuri wrote:There's also no need for introductions because we're generally a friendly bunch and will welcome you with wide open arms anyway.
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::inches away:: Um...right.J-0080 wrote:ryuu_hime13 wrote:But that's what revision is for! Whenever I write stuff I ask people who know stuff about the subject matter to read it for me and point out any stuff that seems iffy...that'd be a good way to prevent "Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land" from becoming an imminent threat.DJ_Izumi wrote:My worry is getting the scenario done wrong and basicly creating 'Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land' -.-;;;;ryuu_hime13 wrote:It's an interesting topic! I think you should go for it.
kill whitey!
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Hmm...well, I don't know what you have not posted yet, but why not develop why said characters are there, give them a higher purpose...explain the reasoning behind the sudden culture crash...etc.DJ wrote:My worry is getting the scenario done wrong and basicly creating 'Whitey's Adventures In Jap Land' -.-;;;;
/has actually read concept now, before I was merely amusing myself at Jon's expense. Sorry Jon.
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My idea has been pretty solid for 18months now. Only things that would change would be the OP and ED themes to fit the changing times.ryuu_hime13 wrote:It'd be interesting to see how much further it could develop given time.
My idea is very tame compared to previous incarnations, but it's very plausable too. It COULD exist in the real world... That thaught makes me feel warm. ^^