::gets the noob pitch fork:: (joking)
Lets see solid cocept and some non-random scenes
Things to fix:
Interlace flicker all over the place (The lines OMG my eyes!)
Try exporting in MPEG format not WMV it's about is good as RM format.
It looked like dvd footage ,but, you need a better capture codec
try my personal fav huffy

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The Scene matching could have been better
Questions:
Are you using a windows movie maker or adobe primere to make this?