Kaz's new hobby..... your opinions welcome

Propyro · Post by **Propyro** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:02 pm

hmmm ... nice hands.

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Kazutaka · Post by **Kazutaka** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:04 pm

I havent gone very far with it yet... time seems to not be on my side lately.

Just some chara outlines and story ideas.... mostly a love story about a boy and girl who meet when they are about 14. Fall in love swear to always be together, lots of trauma and angst. Some kind of end of the world evil sub-plot...

Still in the very eary idea stage

Kazutaka · Post by **Kazutaka** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:11 pm

Thanks, I need some encouragement, I showed some of these to my friends and all I got was... Oh a cartoon, thats cool......

I knew you guys would have some taste....

**loves the attention**

This is what I have been doing since being alone lately, Im glad to see its worth while.....

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:19 pm

These are all very good, especially if you "just started"...

No real problems with the proportions. The only actual gripe I have is Rei's face looks a bit weird.

Speaking of which, someone should make another Art contest.

Where's SSJVegita20991337Blah when you need him?

Gaikotsu · Post by **Gaikotsu** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:21 pm

Kazutaka wrote:I havent gone very far with it yet... time seems to not be on my side lately.

Just some chara outlines and story ideas.... mostly a love story about a boy and girl who meet when they are about 14. Fall in love swear to always be together, lots of trauma and angst. Some kind of end of the world evil sub-plot...

Still in the very eary idea stage

I know exactly what you mean with regards to time. Although I just got finished with a big block of tests last week, so classes should let up on the pressure a bit in the near future.

If you ever want help with the story, feel free to drop me a line. I've never done much work with love stories, but maybe trying something different would help break me out of this writer's block I've had lately. Just offering.

Propyro · Post by **Propyro** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:24 pm

El Banana wrote:These are all very good, especially if you "just started"...

No real problems with the proportions. The only actual gripe I have is Rei's face looks a bit weird.

Speaking of which, someone should make another Art contest.

Where's SSJVegita20991337Blah when you need him?

it's better then this. i've seen amore fucked up resin of her ... but i can't really find it right now.

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Org Profile · Post by **Otohiko** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:26 pm

Is that a Rei blow-up doll?

I still can't see the pics...

Kazutaka · Post by **Kazutaka** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:26 pm

Gaikotsu wrote: If you ever want help with the story, feel free to drop me a line. I've never done much work with love stories, but maybe trying something different would help break me out of this writer's block I've had lately. Just offering.

Thanks, I may need some ideas, Im trying to change the nasty habbit of never finishing half of what I start. Ive been distracted lately reading lots of fanfic..

Propyro · Post by **Propyro** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:27 pm

never mind i found it ...

never draw Rei or Asuka like this ...

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Org Profile · Post by **Otohiko** » Sat Oct 11, 2003 8:28 pm

Ah! I see it now!

Great stuff, not perfect, but great.

One suggestion - a bit more careful with the eyes. They're well done, but with a bit more work they'll pretty much be at a professional level.

Makes me want to draw a bit too, but my head is too empty for now...