Hmm... I just post this reply,cuz I'm a rookie editor searching for opinions too,so you don't hav to listen to me if you don't like it what I wrote about your video.Well in my opinion you hav to try to combinate a little more music rythm with the scenes,I'm downloading a lot of AMVs of ppl that made videos with amazing edit quality,and the keyword that I found on those works to make good videos is right scenes on right time combinating with music beats,my videos don't hav that quality,but I'm still trying to get better,anyway I don't know if my videos are good or not ,cuz unfortunately,I don't know how to hav a link to ppl Download my videos here on ORG,but if you're interested in my videos go here >>
http://www11.plala.or.jp/PAUKATSUYOSHI/ and maybe you can give some opinions too,and if you do,pls be honest.