Meh...art...

SnhKnives · Post by **SnhKnives** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 12:13 am

yeah, coming from a fellow artist, i can really appreciate this. If you dont mind i could make some constructive criticism for you. you know, just to point out a few things to help you out.

yuppa · Post by **yuppa** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 6:33 am

Damn! Pretty damn good picture man. keep on the same track and tyr tp improve some on the hands. Otherwiase it is excellent.

Jebadia · Post by **Jebadia** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 6:35 am

feel free to use me as a shooting gallery for critisizm. Nothing can be as bizarre as some of the things my art teacher said... "Jesus, your supposed to make it look like waves in the sand, not look like a bunch of pubic hair.."

fyrtenheimer · Post by **fyrtenheimer** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 9:20 am

LMAO

I had an art teacher like that in HS, he rocked.
But all lewis county teachers are fucked neway.

yuppa · Post by **yuppa** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 3:03 pm

LOL sure are.

SephirothJenova · Post by **SephirothJenova** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 6:06 pm

I'll criticize it. I love art (I know good art when I see it). It's actually pretty good, but there's some weird things about it. First, there's no trigger on the gun and no pointer finger to even pull the trigger. Second, on his left hand (the open hand) the thumb should be on top, because it's very hard for a person to bend his thumb back like that, unless he's deformed. The left edge of the colar looks like it has tape on it. The left side of his neck seems to be missing the edge, so his neck just extends infinitely backwards. And finally, is he supposed to be wearing gloves, because the left wrist suggests that he is. These are just very simple things that will make your arm better and easier for people, mainly artsy people, to understand.

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Jebadia · Post by **Jebadia** » Fri Jun 13, 2003 9:05 pm

SephirothJenova wrote:I'll criticize it. I love art (I know good art when I see it). It's actually pretty good, but there's some weird things about it. First, there's no trigger on the gun and no pointer finger to even pull the trigger.

Oh the finger is there, I didn't spend much time working out the detail of the hands, thus why the left hand looks like something Handsome would have from Scary Movie 2 (take my strong hand child!!)

The left edge of the colar looks like it has tape on it.

Strangly enough that jacket is based off of a jacket I actually have, and it's colar hand this extended velcro strap that rapped around the front of the neck. The angle of the colar ended up looking obscure and hard to tell...I love that jacket...

The left side of his neck seems to be missing the edge, so his neck just extends infinitely backwards

Haha..yes, indeed a part of the neck is missing, I didn't notice till I scanned it cause I drew it in quite a rush. I was wondering if anyone was going to notice that.

is he supposed to be wearing gloves, because the left wrist suggests that he is.

Yes, his other hand is harder to tell cause the cuff of his sleeve covers up the bottom of the glove.