What the? Hand Drawn art from SSJ!? No way!
- Summanaro
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if you don't like my constructive critisism, you can stick it up your ass.
#1 of bad: using graph paper, you are now showing your non-|33t skills of an artist.
#2: it would look way better if it weren't shaded, it's okay and everything.. but.. eh.. you are now showing that you are working on shading..
#3: it just doesn't appeal.. it just sits there.. I mean.. you need a cool pose or something... I dunno what your showing, but stop showing it!
#4: the feet curve inward, as well as some of the other places.. like the head.. and stuff.. btw he's too short too, bah you are now showing that you lacked a bit on the technique
okay that's with the bad, here's with teh good:
#1: you did a very nice job on all of the little designs and stuff, I dunno if this was very painful or if you were just playing around.
#2: the shading is okay, but you make it too dark
#3: you did okay on the masculin form, but I think he's a little too beefy..
yeah there's a lot of 'ifs' and 'buts' and 'stuff' in there, but I can see you have talent and just need to work for a few months on your technique, the main downfall of this picture is the pose.. it's just.. to plain...
#1 of bad: using graph paper, you are now showing your non-|33t skills of an artist.
#2: it would look way better if it weren't shaded, it's okay and everything.. but.. eh.. you are now showing that you are working on shading..
#3: it just doesn't appeal.. it just sits there.. I mean.. you need a cool pose or something... I dunno what your showing, but stop showing it!
#4: the feet curve inward, as well as some of the other places.. like the head.. and stuff.. btw he's too short too, bah you are now showing that you lacked a bit on the technique
okay that's with the bad, here's with teh good:
#1: you did a very nice job on all of the little designs and stuff, I dunno if this was very painful or if you were just playing around.
#2: the shading is okay, but you make it too dark
#3: you did okay on the masculin form, but I think he's a little too beefy..
yeah there's a lot of 'ifs' and 'buts' and 'stuff' in there, but I can see you have talent and just need to work for a few months on your technique, the main downfall of this picture is the pose.. it's just.. to plain...
your mom.
- SSJVegita0609
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Okay, I was in MATH class, thus the graph paper, in case you haven't noticed I was also taking notes on that paper (what you see is merely a small corner). 2nd off, thanks for the tips, but this is really just a doodle, don't critique it too harshly (but thanks anyways
). Third off, Summ, just for that post, I will make it my duty to pwn you in the next gfx contest
(coming, summer 2003
).



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wha?
what the hell.
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Someone say Soul Calibur 2!? Damnit, now I need to go and spend a couple of hours playing it because I was reminded I have it, too much Soul Calibur 2 make Lee go crazy...
Topic? Oh yeah, cool drawing, mainly because it reminds me of Cecil Dark Knight from FFIV,
. I don't know what all the serious reviews are about, he drew it in Maths,
maybe I'll post some of my messing around...at least that way if anyone slags it off you can claim to have much better. 



