pork sausage productions page

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 3:11 am

ok i need a little feedback on my intro so far, page isn't all the way up, i've been spending too much time making amvs, but i would like you feedback please

http://www.angelfire.com/film/porksausage/

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 3:16 am

also for the timing to be right (unless you have dsl or better) right click on the film and set to medium or low quality

El Banana · Post by **El Banana** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 5:45 am

Hm, I think its okay, but I didn't like the text color in the part with the samurai dude. And the text leaves way too quickly in that part and the one with the eva, making it tough to read.

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 3:39 pm

ok i'll fix

thanx for the feedback el banana

RichLather · Post by **RichLather** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 3:48 pm

I'll second banananananaana's opinion on not only the choice of text color over the samurai pic, but the lack of time the credits are onscreen and still. Right now they wander around impressivley, but you can't read the things.

You could still do the transitions, but leave 'em up unmoving long enough for people to read. Try this: read the words out loud in a slower voice than you would normally use and time it. This will give you a pretty good estimate of how long to leave them onscreen.

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 4:35 pm

by the time you read this it should be completely revamped

new music...slower text better color

thanx again for the feedback

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 4:51 pm

ok upload completed

RichLather · Post by **RichLather** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 4:52 pm

Better, better.

Farlo · Post by **Farlo** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 5:02 pm

what'd you think of the music richlather?

RichLather · Post by **RichLather** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 6:25 pm

I'll have to watch it again, but I did notice it wasn't as "driven" as the first version.

The second version is slow, moody, and I thought it worked pretty well.