Hi friend! What are you talking about? This is definitely not bad at all. I'm a "story" type person so it's not really my area. I'm a n00b too, and I definitely thought the beat sync and tone matched really well. My suggestion: watch some Shin videos, you seem like you're headed the same way he rolls, and he's pretty fantastic.
https://www.youtube.com/user/tehninjarox
But don't let it get you down, he's like the best technical editor I know of. Just kinda watch and get ideas.
And if you're feeling it, stretch yourself and try to do a storyline!
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That's my bread and butter. Here's my vid, lemme know if you have any thoughts:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZvRUhnL6ETQ
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kthnx.