The End of My World

[pacotacoshell]

I just couldn't finish it. I got to a part where I just felt that it would eventually hold spoilers (haven't watched it yet), and I had to close it. ;-; I do gotta say, for all that I watched, it was pretty damn emotional and it further pushed me to get off my a- and watch the series already. As for the shakes and zooms parts, the only part I felt was overdone was :44-:46. Everything other than that was pretty well placed, imo. Good job. :3

[xDieguitoAMV]

There are things I could nitpick at, like some iffy shakes maybe, I don't know. But I prefer not to in this case. It's a really solid amv and I don't feel mentioning the little things really matters; first time watching it, I had no big complaints, so why bother.

Just to be positively constructive though: In my opinion, I don't think you need to cut back on zooms. Honestly, they were fine. They were well-placed, that's all that matters. I'm personally a fan of the zooms at the end, particularly. I think these might be the ones Aimo referred to as overkill, but I think it was well done; in comparison to the slower parts, it added a lot of impact for a great climax, giving me metaphorical chills. The text was alright; it was a lot better than some cheesy, nasty cursive font. I think if it were a bit thinner and just a bit less typical-arial-looking kind of font, then it would have been perfect. Either way, it was alright, and didn't bother me in the least. The atmosphere and impact was dead on throughout the entire video, transitions were smooth, and the story clear.

Hope you don't mistake my positive criticism as lacking constructiveness; in my honest opinion, it was well done, and any changes I'd make to your video would be something I'd make as an editor, not as a viewer.
(I always feel the need to add this, for some reason, as I'm typically a harsh critic.)

Nicely done!
P.S. I wanted to speak in Spanish, but I believe that I need more practice to speak better. ): Quería hablar en español, pero creo que me falta practicar más para hablar mejor

Thanks for the critic , this help me a lot.

[Centurione]

That was absolutely beautiful. Why are Clannad AMVs always so touching?!

[TritioAFB]

Since I promised to comment back:

This is my style of video since I also like to retell stories in amvs. The zooms and shakes at certain times looked natural, the way the idea flows through the scene selection is just amazing. Probably a different font at 2:04 was the fact that could make this a 5 de 5 video. But if we consider we don't have too often this kind of videos for Clannad, I find pointless to put all the moments that needed work. The amv for itself is solid, enjoyable and that's what really matters

Por cierto, ya habia dejado mi voto en la ZonaAMV

[ViKAMV]

Ya comente en ZA, excelente trabajo Diego, fué del que más me gusto de los tuyos, gran atmósfera creaste, precioso ;D

[Mol]

Pretty vid .

[gotegenks]

^what he said