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RenaSun
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Deep Inside

Post by RenaSun » Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:46 pm

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Video: Deep Inside (Preview)
Category: Character Profile, Dance, Romance, Sentimental
Anime: Bakemonogatari, Dance In The Vampire Bund, Le Portrait De Petit Cossette, Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica, Saint Seiya - The Lost Canvas, Deadman Wonderland, Arakawa Under The Bridge, Katanagatari, Blassreiter, Kimi Ni Todoke, Suzumiya Haruhi No Shoushitsu, Toaru Majutsu No Index, Hachimitsu To Clover, Junjou Romantica, Amagami SS, Kaichou Wa Maid-sama!, Shakugan No Shana
Song: Poison
Artist: Groove Coverage
Creator: RenaSun

I wanna love you, but I better not touch
I wanna hold you, but my senses tell me to stop
I wanna kiss you, but I want it too much
I wanna taste you but your lips are venomous poison

Clip about the feelings, experiences, about the state of the soul of a man who loves.
Hope you enjoy it)

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Kairih
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Re: Deep Inside

Post by Kairih » Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:24 pm

This is really intense, I didn't like some lip synch but the rest is perfect. :)
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Taite
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Re: Deep Inside

Post by Taite » Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:39 pm

Thank you for editing an amv to this song, and well.

At around :28, it was a bit too slow for my tastes, and I was hoping for more of the video to be synced to the... er, drum beats you could say. I feared that the rest of it would be synced the same way. It picked up nicely though, and I enjoyed it from there on out.

There were some odd parts: :49/:50 (didn't like the weird intentional orphan frame thing), :55-:58 (thought the flashes were unnecessary and another method could have been used for better impact), 1:12-1:16 (lip flap/lip sync? either way, wasn't a fan), 1:27-1:30 (those two scenes were too still and slow for that part of the song imo), 2:04-2:04 (again, the scene was too still. The little flickers added more to the impact, but it was still too slow), 2:13-2:16 (had the same issue as the previous one), and some other very little things. All the things I mentioned here are very small details that didn't take away from my enjoyment of the amv, but as a perfectionist and editor, I can't help but noticing them. :nose:

However, some other parts I really loved as well
: 1:51-2:13 (perfect selection of clips, very well paced and placed hardcuts, little bit of some internal sync cleverly added, and an overall nice atmosphere.) Also, the use of other anime was neat. I know which scenes are from what anime, so it makes it more obvious, but it's easy to ignore that and focus on the fact that there is one dark haired girl and one dark haired guy; the different characters that portrayed the two all looked close enough to be used together, so good job. Overall atmosphere in the entire amv was spot on as well. I'm quite glad someone edited this song-- it was overused quite a bit in the past, and it was one of those songs that people started to hate just because of that, but I still like it. Only good amv I have seen edited to it as well.

Good job (:
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Re: Deep Inside

Post by AimoAio » Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:54 pm

Taite wrote:Also, the use of other anime was neat. I know which scenes are from what anime, so it makes it more obvious, but it's easy to ignore that and focus on the fact that there is one dark haired girl and one dark haired guy; the different characters that portrayed the two all looked close enough to be used together, so good job.
x2. Also the flicker at 2:12ish was....really strange and kinda threw me off slightly.

And like Taite mentioned, some of the pacing felt a bit slow but overall it was nicely put together. :up:

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S.A. Robert
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Re: Deep Inside

Post by S.A. Robert » Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:34 am

Мое мнение знаешь, отличная работа :up:
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Re: Deep Inside

Post by gotegenks » Fri Jan 20, 2012 3:19 pm

what they said.

nice banner
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