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by CodeZTM » Tue Dec 27, 2011 10:13 am
I'm just going to list out of context the things I felt that the video might have done to be improved upon.
*TBS Watermark. I highly reccomend cropping it out (or purchasing the DVDs of the series for watermarkless footage). Very unprofessional and just kills the viewing pleasure of the AMV.
*The scene selection and editing was bland for my tastes. The AMV is mostly scenes of warships in space with a black overlay hitting all the drum beats, which got boring to watch, since there isn't much action going on.. This wouldn't be so bad, but you repeated this same style throughout nearly the entire video. Try changing scenes more frequently, and don't be afraid to do hard cuts or fades into new scenes on each of those beats.
*Was the middle part a song cut? If so, you might consider making it more smooth next time.
*Conceptually, I really didn't feel anything for it. I didn't know what the AMV was trying to portray other than "space". THe song as "lost in space", but I really didn't feel like the characters were "lost" so much as wanting to kill everything.
Just my thoughts/feelings. Keep going, and good luck with future projects!
