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[Mkid]

Im a little mad i didn't see this mep sooner D: lol but i look forward to seeing this, CAN'T Wait to see everyone's AMAZING tracks lol

[Taite]

I'm sorry I've been inactive for awhile, I'm trying to deal with 500 things at once. I've watched all your betas so far, I just need to find the time to give crit, and then work on my beta more. I have one more week until Christmas Break, so definitely by then I should be free to lounge and get to all of your crit.

[MystykAMV]

I just sent my new beta, do you think it's ready for final?

[CodeZTM]

I'd personally say it's ready for a final. You did a really nice job with it and fixed the few complaints I had with it.

[lloyd9988]

I'd personally say it's ready for a final. You did a really nice job with it and fixed the few complaints I had with it.

x2 It looks really good Nice one Mystyk

[[madaraxD]]

I agree with code and lloyd, love ur part Mystyk

[AimoAio]

Mystyk: I think it's ready for a final, so whenever you have time just send it over. Good job with the changes, I really like the mask.

Lloyd:

Spoiler :

Is it just me or does the audio seem a little glitchy at the start? Anyway about the video itself:

Really good. Definitely fits the image very well. For 0:06ish I would suggest a light zoom out since it feels a little still. I'm not so overly fond of the cutter transition at 0:13, it's a bit noticeable so perhaps a lower opacity + more feathering? Might also want to keyframe it longer so it feels smoother. I like the beat sync sequence at 0:17 but the shoe scene was in the midst of the other ones which doesn't feel quite right. And also I thought I saw the other girl(Duck?) in there too, you might want to keep those beat sync scenes to ones of Rue and the Prince. The scene at 0:26 feels a little long too, I think for the end part of it you could use the scene you had as an overlay at 0:24. I really loved the overlay sync for the background music though, that was really nice.

I haven't made any progress on my part since the last beta, but I'll be working on it when break starts. (next week) ^^

[Mkid]

Llyod YOUR VIDEO WAS AMAZING, you should be really proud of yourself, i literally hate this song, i watched this video OVER AND OVER AGAIN because it was soo good i agree with everything aimo said.. Fix those little minor mistakes and you got your final.

0:12 - was a bad transition. too much, it hit the beat but it wasn't smooth,
Suggestion: to keep the transition.. but make it fast for about 4 frames and than slow it down while still zooming out
0:13: the cookie cutter ugly and fast.
make it a full fade.(like drag the entire fade bar all the across) *begining from 100 opacity, end of the clip 0*

That was the only thing i had a problem with GREAT track

[lloyd9988]

Mystyk: I think it's ready for a final, so whenever you have time just send it over. Good job with the changes, I really like the mask.

Lloyd:

Spoiler :

Is it just me or does the audio seem a little glitchy at the start? Anyway about the video itself:

Really good. Definitely fits the image very well. For 0:06ish I would suggest a light zoom out since it feels a little still. I'm not so overly fond of the cutter transition at 0:13, it's a bit noticeable so perhaps a lower opacity + more feathering? Might also want to keyframe it longer so it feels smoother. I like the beat sync sequence at 0:17 but the shoe scene was in the midst of the other ones which doesn't feel quite right. And also I thought I saw the other girl(Duck?) in there too, you might want to keep those beat sync scenes to ones of Rue and the Prince. The scene at 0:26 feels a little long too, I think for the end part of it you could use the scene you had as an overlay at 0:24. I really loved the overlay sync for the background music though, that was really nice.

I haven't made any progress on my part since the last beta, but I'll be working on it when break starts. (next week) ^^

Llyod YOUR VIDEO WAS AMAZING, you should be really proud of yourself, i literally hate this song, i watched this video OVER AND OVER AGAIN because it was soo good i agree with everything aimo said.. Fix those little minor mistakes and you got your final.

0:12 - was a bad transition. too much, it hit the beat but it wasn't smooth,
Suggestion: to keep the transition.. but make it fast for about 4 frames and than slow it down while still zooming out
0:13: the cookie cutter ugly and fast.
make it a full fade.(like drag the entire fade bar all the across) *begining from 100 opacity, end of the clip 0*

That was the only thing i had a problem with GREAT track

Lolz, thank you guys sooooo much xD I was stuck on that one for so long and now I got my groove back I'll get this done real quick

[CodeZTM]

Great work lloyd! :3 I'd mention what Aimo/mysty said, but other than that, it's more than ready for a final.

Speaking of which, I need to get my next beta out already. >_>

/goes to edit