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[lloyd9988]

AimoAio: Gah, Now I'm jealous. This looks so gewd! xD

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0:17 - 0:20 was my favorite part. The scenes just fit so well together xD

0:35 - 0:36 Scene kinda drags a bit too long.

0:48 (Just an extra that might help) Is it possible to tighten the beat sync at that moment with another corresponding scene?? Just a thought

Anyway, I it. Way too go Aimo!

[AimoAio]

Thanks for the feedback. I'll make some changes and try and get all the blanks filled out by the second deadline.

[Kousaka]

lloyd9988:
I love the color scheme~!

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Pretty much what has been said so far. A couple of beats that need to be hit. I'm not sure what I feel about the spotlight at 0:10 but maybe change that?

AimoAio:
So, so amazing

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This song fits really well with Shiki. When I seen it, I was like "OMG PERFECT COMBO -DIES-". The only thing that I thought was wrong was 0:20 - 0:23. It felt weird to me, but that may just be me xD

AngelDragoon:
I love the combo *O*

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I really liked the beta! Hmmm...I'm not sure if I like the fade at 0:08 and at 0:10, I wouldn't really call it lip flap but I'm not too fond of that particular scene there.

[AimoAio]

AngelDragoon:

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I love the idea you have so far! :3 But I think my biggest gripe with it is that I can't seem to tell if you were going for lyric sync or beat sync because it seems to be a mix of both at strange points. Otherwise really nice.

iCardioidAMV:

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I think inbetween the scenes of the girl you should maybe add some of the guy so it fits better with the perspective in the song. ^^ But it's nice so far.

Also due to school problems Kbleach has dropped out of the MEP so track 7 is free again.

[Kamih]

well it's me again e____e and omfg i rendered my first beta LOOOL (iknowiamlatebutbetterlatethanneverright8D ) -shot-

anyway here are my reviews for ya :3

lloyd9988:
Aside from some flaws it's really good !!

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Is it only me or are the clips a(at the beginning mostly) somehow pixely ... as in meaning you kind of used Sharpen and so the outlines of the clips will get harder O: ... if not then it's kind of a footage problem or my laptop is on the verge of dying xD
On the other hand i really liked the spotlight clip at 0:10 .. i don't know why the others see it as ... not fitting LOL. Also the b/w beat hitting scenes are awesome . The only things which i didn't quite like was the purple face from her at 0:12 e-o and the scene after the shoes @ 0:19... it ended so abrupt D: without any transition and so on ( i mean there is 1 second of the dress and then it switched to the face again) as suggestion : i would not use the dress scene after the shoes :3
and is the aspect ratio (pan/crop) @ 0:20 onwords on purpose ? o:

AimoAio:
hurrrrrr my feedback for you may be prepared LOL

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okay first of all i am glad that you did Teeth now and not me LOL because i would have never such a inspiration for the middle part of the song 8D (good thing my mix wasn't choosen xD)
anyway: @0:12 ... did you use the transition blinds or is it from the anime ? LOL ... cuz it's quite ... odd .. for me at least D: to begin the scene e__e . I loved the part from 0:03 till 0:06 though
the scene @ 0:20 is strange because you show us eyes and not teeth xD and i also think it's more than strange for the whole scene till 0:25 D:

0:35 - 0:36 Scene kinda drags a bit too long.

Agreed :3

0:48 (Just an extra that might help) Is it possible to tighten the beat sync at that moment with another corresponding scene?? Just a thought

Agreed too xD just from 0:43 onwards already :3

AngelDragoon:
Overall very good :3

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I agree with Aimo and iCardioid in the most points :3
As suggestion: play around with texts + beathitting

iCardioidAMV:
short beta is short D:

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I really love the beat-hitting at the beginning 8D and well ... since it' so short i can't say more sorry D: ... but i think i agree with AimoAio :3
Also like i already said in the review for AngelDragoon : add some texts and hit they to the beat 8D would look better if used right ofc LOL , and maybe some cookie cutters? not colourfull ones of course because she requested the darker side of it LOL ... even though it's kind of difficult then D:

[AimoAio]

Kamih:

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Holy crap, that was really good! And then you were complaining and saying it was bad. D< Anyway the first part is really nice, though it did feel kinda slow but I think that might be cause you didn't sync the crossfades to the beats but I guess if you did then there'd be an extra beat....unless you have another scene to fit there? :O The sync at 0:17 is really nice but that scene starts too early so it makes it really slow. And at 0:26, I think you can split that into 2 scenes - one like it is just now and then crossfade a zoomed up version to her face. And the one after is also too long LOL. But it's really pretty so far. ^^ I like it.

[AimoAio]

Thanks to Pockying for reminding me but fail Miss Co-Ordinator has just realized that the MEP does not have a poster or a sig! And neither does it have a credits track...

I would make one but we all know what my PS skills are like... So does anyone else want to take on this job? ^^

And any suggestions for a credits song would be great too. I was thinking of a remix of one of the songs in the MEP but I don't want to push a random remix song that I like onto some poor fool to edit. XD For now I've got an Alejandro remix and also a Bad Romance remix that I found pretty quickly but I'm not sure if you guys like it...

[[madaraxD]]

well i really love this remix of lady gaga: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naJfryM0nsY ( 0:40 - 1:05 ) but i think is too short :/

[Taite]

Sorry all, I've been out of town for awhile and was swamped with homework, so I'll update this post before I leave for my Thanksgiving Vacation with my crit for all the betas I received. I'll send out my beta (it's the same since last time) out at the same time as well.

[AimoAio]

well i really love this remix of lady gaga: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naJfryM0nsY ( 0:40 - 1:05 ) but i think is too short :/

Yeah, I'm thinking the credits will at least need to be a minute long and not over 1m 30s. But that section is nice, I'm not so sure about the rest of it though. XD

Sorry all, I've been out of town for awhile and was swamped with homework, so I'll update this post before I leave for my Thanksgiving Vacation with my crit for all the betas I received. I'll send out my beta (it's the same since last time) out at the same time as well.

Sure, thanks for letting me know. ^^

And also a friendly reminder to everyone else that the 2nd beta deadline is next week. Any day is fine, just try and show me some progress on your parts.