[Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by NS » Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:02 am

Very cool, I just gotta find a songs and do some brainstormin' and I'm in.

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by Brad » Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:51 pm

http://vimeo.com/26351643

Enjoy :o

Also made a Vimeo group. So whenever you've made something, upload it there and add it to the group.
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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by McDirty » Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:47 pm

Nice and simple vid Brad. I love the hexagonal design as well. Where do you get your background textures from mostly?

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by Metro » Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:03 pm

Nice Brad. Very pleasing and professional looking =D

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by NS » Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:52 pm

Yeah I definitely like it. The colors and shapes are bright and bold but work together. It's simple but effective, just like I like it.

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by Magnus » Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:10 pm

Looked neat Brad. I was a bit sceptical about the neon-green typo. at first but it sort of made sense with the overall colorful surounding.
Animation went smoothly and the concept was well presented, nice job :up:
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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by Brad » Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:56 am

Here's a little inspiration for the day

http://vimeo.com/3241601

This is a spot done for The Anime Network by Nando Costa who is one of my favorite motion designers. It's just got a really tight, clean, fluid style that I just dig on. He doesn't skimp on the graphic design either. Every transition goes to a lock-up that could be it's own unique styleframe. That's something that's good to get into the habit of. Look at a spot and then try and figure out what the original boards would've looked like. It helps when thinking about how to set up your own boards.
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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by McDirty » Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:41 pm

http://www.vimeo.com/26643647

Try not to hate. :sweat:

If you got comments, I would greatly appreciate them.

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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by Brad » Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:53 pm

McDirty wrote:http://www.vimeo.com/26643647

Try not to hate. :sweat:

If you got comments, I would greatly appreciate them.
Not bad :) Cool to see you doing stuff.

Here's some critique:
  • As you pointed out in your description, the strokes themselves are kinda messy. You definitely see the repetition in the brush "shape", giving it a distinctly non-realistic look.

    The camera movements + cuts were kind of jarring. Like, you'd cut to a shot where the camera wasn't moving, right in the middle of the camera just starting to ramp up speed.

    Would've liked to have seen a bit more easing in the animation overall.

    Maybe bring more orange into that background. Or add a little subtle texture to the background. Like oriental parchment or silk or something.
I thought the splashes at the end looked really good, though as you said, they're stock :P Nevertheless you implemented them well from a compositional standpoint.


I'm still waiting on Jon to finish his up before I start a new theme + motif (since this whole thing really started as a way to get him specifically to do new stuff).
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Re: [Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

Post by McDirty » Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:01 pm

Thanks a bunch Brad for the wonderful comments. I'm going to do another calligraphy vid like this, so I definitely appreciate and will apply the critique.

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