My crappy stand-up...

[mexicanjunior]

My crappy stand-up at open mic night at Hyena's. By the time I got onstage, the crowd had pretty much dissipated and were completely indifferent to what was going on on-stage. I was just glad I didn't mess up any of the punchlines or dry heave on-stage. Will probably be a 1 and done deal, can scratch it off the bucket list now. Be warned, this set is VERY NSFW!

http://youtu.be/QhyM6gGQPT4

[Castor Troy]

Good schtick. I didn't realize you had a Kinect.

[mexicanjunior]

BTW, it was my first time on-stage, so delivery was spotty at best...

[dreamawake]

Memorize your shctick and be more enthusiastic and you could be slayin' em

[Pwolf]

Lookin good MJ.

need to work on your execution a bit i think and what Joey said, be more enthusiastic like you want to be there. Also make sure your set is relevant to the audience. The kinect/quarter joke was great but maybe a generation too late. Keep it up

[guy07]

A 12 year old ...?

[dreamawake]

also yeah tight as a 12 year old may not work so well on audiences when you're first starting out...gotta save jokes that dirty until you get some rep behind u for being a silly ass

[Castor Troy]

Big Dave hasn't changed.

[mexicanjunior]

Thanks for the feedback guys, will probably be awhile before I get back on-stage but I will definitely take your suggestions to heart, especially the enthusiasm levels...

[Kitsuner]

also yeah tight as a 12 year old may not work so well on audiences when you're first starting out...gotta save jokes that dirty until you get some rep behind u for being a silly ass

See, I liked the follow-up line about not owning a wrench, but you said it so quietly, I almost missed it the first time. You had some good schtick in there though, so keep at it, dude!