[DZ-Studios: Blood Sugar Productions] Braindead

[Enigma]

flow was kinda sketchy and pacing was inconsistent, but it was still pretty good.

mostly this. cool poster.

[dreamawake]

flow was kinda sketchy and pacing was inconsistent, but it was still pretty good.

I dunno dude, can't say I agree with this. I personally feel the editing and pacing were very consistent, but to each his own. Glad you dug it, anyway.

[ExSphere]

flow was kinda sketchy and pacing was inconsistent, but it was still pretty good.

I dunno dude, can't say I agree with this.

Nah I can see where Blains coming from with that statement. I liked how the flow got disturbed and jungled up at times because it was trying to be a style in and of itself, but I don't think you pulled it off well enough for it to be enjoyable for most crowds.

[NS]

I agree, it's a matter of opinion. I just felt like you had action bits that kind of spilled over into when the song was calmer, and it was kind of jarring to me.

As for the consistency, it just seemed like when certain parts of the song came up you went at different paces each time they occured. Sure this definately isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I just felt like it could have been a little tighter.

[AimoAio]

Neat. I like it.

[dreamawake]

Thx for the comments guys, glad to see my first premiere video was pretty good lol

[Vanity]

:O, very excellent

[McDirty]

OMG! How could I have missed this!?

That was awesome Arash! The music and FLCL match perfectly.
I kind of zoned out during the middle of the vid, but i think that was your purpose in the first place.

I give it 4 out of 5 Rickenbacker 4001s!

[gotegenks]

i thought i commented on this...

dude, great stuff. not ur typical shit, but it still retained that "fuck you conventional editing" style that i love. some of the cuts were so good they had me confused and i rewound that crap so many times just trying to figure it out.

that said, some of it was pretty sloppy, which added to the feel but there were several times where i just wanted it to be a little bit cleaner, and don't give me that jforcebullshit and tell me "i wanted it that way"

anyway, 4.5 sounds good. pretty inspiring as an editor i must say.

[dreamawake]

i thought i commented on this...

dude, great stuff. not ur typical shit, but it still retained that "fuck you conventional editing" style that i love. some of the cuts were so good they had me confused and i rewound that crap so many times just trying to figure it out.

that said, some of it was pretty sloppy, which added to the feel but there were several times where i just wanted it to be a little bit cleaner, and don't give me that jforcebullshit and tell me "i wanted it that way"

anyway, 4.5 sounds good. pretty inspiring as an editor i must say.

Was my first video in premiere so yeah, some sloppyness is to be expected.

Thx for the comments guise